TEEN WOLF : A LION'S ROAR
Forced out of his lavish Hollywood lifestyle after a scandal too public to ignore, sixteen-year-old Alex McCall is exiled back to the one place he despises: Beacon Hills. Estranged from his twin brother, Scott, and haunted by unsettling dreams and a past trauma that drove his family apart, Alex finds his world of privilege clashing spectacularly with the quiet, enigmatic town. As he navigates unfamiliar territory and reconnects with a life he thought he'd left behind, Alex begins to uncover the dangerous mysteries lurking beneath Beacon Hills' surface. With his own latent powers starting to awaken and his brother Scott's life taking a sudden, lycanthropic turn, Alex finds himself in constant peril, on a path far stranger and more threatening than he could have ever imagined.
Bout time for a real review. This is as of Chapter 12. Writing Quality- Author uses AI grammer is good, but AI dialogue makes MC extremely corny when author tries to emulate a "Tony Stark"- Like character in Alex. Which i believe is nice when done right, but in my opinion, this was not done right. Story Development - One Piece esque pacing, barely anything happens per chapter. There aren't even that many words per chapter, and the author fills up that word count with uninteresting events. eg. Waking up and going to school, without reaching the doors, took up a whole chapter. Im not the only one who has noticed this as i see other comments pointing it out as well. Character Design - Chapters 1 and 2 were perfect in portraying his character, but as the story goes on, he talks more dramatically and overly snarkily, not in a funny way, but in a theater kid type of way, like attention seeking. And that whole ordeal he had with Jackson, no idea what he was doing there. Update Stability- Like i said before, author uses AI, and he posts very little words per chapter, he started with a chapter everyday of the week, then went to a chapter every other day of the week, and now its been 4 days since the last chapter, so im not really satisfied with it considering he doesnt write this himself. World Background- cant say much, the story is still in its beginning phases.
love the story lore and how it's been written, humors came in graceful words love the story and the character best twin teen wolf ever read, please keep up the great work.
This is perfect …. Really well written …. Keep it up
Haven't found to many teen wolf fics. I'll give this one a shot........................................................................................
Its a bit weird, but I don't dislike it.