The death of a commoner to the rise of a god

Hello to anyone that sees this I am the author of this story. This is the first novel I have had published and frankly I am very nervous. I want to be a full time writer but don't know if I have what it takes and so this is a kind of test drive for me. please review and be as harsh as you like criticize anything and everything; however, please don't simply say this sucks or is trash and not explain why. If you dislike the premise that's fine if you think my writing style and descriptions of events aren't good please say so but I would ask that you do not just say this is terrible and not explain why. I am here to grow and evolve along with my story and I hope you can follow along with me.