From Warhammer to Hyperdimensional Harem

This is going to be fun

OK LOST HERE...WHO IS THE HERO OF THIS NOVEL? WHAT THE FUNK. ok author world list..SUPERNATURAL tvshow-WITCHER-CYBERPUNK2077-FALLOUT-LAST OF US-MARVEL-DC-WALKING DEAD-TMNT-BUFFY the vampire slayer-LAST OF US-WALKING DEAD-CLAYMORE ANIME-SAMURAI ANIME-FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST ANIME-BLUE GENDER ANIME-RESIDENT EVIL GAME-TRIGUN ANIME-BLACK LAGOON ANIME-THIS HAS POTENTIAL DO NOT DROP

RAW Name: 从战锤开启的超次元综漫 Author：瞄一眼 ....................................................................................................................

OK THIS IS A GOOD NOVEL.... START WEIRD BUT IT GROWS ON YOU ................................................................................................................................................OK SO THE MC IS A WARHAMMER SPACE MARINE THAT LOVES HISTORY OR DIGS HISTORY OF THE PAST..

Good so far (Current chapter read: Chapter 15), will continue to give powerstones. If there's something to criticize this early, it's the phrasing on some sentences that makes them feel apart from the previous sentence. Other than that, it's a solid 4.6 STARS so far. ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE, BE NICE

okay I don't normally do reviews so here goes. So far you have world building down and character design is good. Your write quality is great in my opinion. The only thing I don't like is the constant info dumps which throws off the story development heavy like the first 3 chapters was taking place in a firefight from guardsmen and daemons you kept info dumping. While some info dumps is good you primarily made those three chapters about info dumping I'm not saying it doesn't get better but so far that's all. I'm seeing and it bogs down the story department.

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For the emperor..........................

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The beginning is weird, but from chapter 5 it is really entertaining

Another fantastic fiction, thank you, I love each and every one of your fanfictions. Thank you once again and keep up the fabulous work.

honestly the story is great some names are difficult to know but the story is insanely detailed which was annoying but now it's growing on me

Too much info dumps, text becomes unreadable. Too little dialogues, for some reason author made character interaction a simple wall of text, somewhere in between countless words he included 1-2 lines of text indicationg certain character thoughts or speech. Honestly this whole 20 chapters ive read seems just like copy pasta from wiki.