Possessing the potential to gain the mechanical and technological knowledge of the peoples of the Multiverse, Aurélien Yamamoto finally sees a way to bring humanity to order and logic, whether against the horrors populating Creation or against the humans who refuse unification.
*I am not good at English, I use Chatgpt to translate my story, after many requests from my readers.
OK grammar and such is fine, what annoys me and causes most of the drop in ratings is the fact that the author gave MC OP powers and then decided to soup up the level of the world to artificially induce suspense. also what is the point of the system if you start the MC off with peak tech? these types of storys are supposed to be about growth. starting the MC off with fallout tech or star wars tech would have been better.
Pretty good novel i like it the idea works for now but he should also build some things from warhammer universe like servo skullls or servitors
Concept was great. Everything else fell apart halfway through chapter 1 going forward. Why change the world of HOTD zombies to running zombie an all that. Also you should just make MC the tech priest since your writing the MC acting like one which i don't like. An the preparation MC took while a week or 2 before apocalypse was horrible, there is so much MC could have done, also MC could have saved the school. I don't mind a op MC if there is a good story/plot which this isn't. I don't recommend reading this.