[GAME OVER]

[You died
Would you like to start a new game?
Yes/No]
.......
.......

[System]

"Speech"

'Thoughts'

Naruto: GAME OVER... Starting New Game (OC SI in Suna)

ISEKAI

ANIME

NARUTO

ONEPIECE


Okay, so I never did very well on this platform so I don't usually give it a lot of consideration anymore.
 Still I decided to post this fic of mine here for those who might be interested.
 I hope you like it.  ; )

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Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 

This is my first review, so I will try to do everything qualitatively. The level of writing in the work is up to par, the dialogues sometimes jar a little, but these are trifles that can be solved by experience. I really like the risky method of developing the main character at the start, not many authors limit their main character at the beginning of the work and do it correctly. The author of this work succeeds in this, and succeeds with a bang, which pleases. The most pleasant thing for me personally is that the main character does not depend completely on the system. Where the main character needs to train his skills himself, develop his capabilities independently. Of the small minuses that are present, as I mentioned earlier, these are the dialogues between the characters. Too raw and not rich enough in my opinion. But as I wrote earlier, this is solved by the author's experience, and I believe in this author. I definitely recommend reading it.