of the Renegade Sovereign(dropped)

Pretty good for your first one. Albeit I must say the first one should've been easy due to lack of expectations. The issue was to continue it. The world background was good, especially Eldoria. I'm not sure about the character design, most of these seem bland other than MC and some few heroines. But it's not that I'm complaining here, you know.

This novel captures beautiful writing, a wonderful writing style. For your first webnovel. It's is very very good. Looking forward to more great workers from you. Keep shining!

Really enjoyed reading it. I liked the storytelling the most. Also like the concept. I always liked fantasy and gods. I will continue reading thiss!!!

Congratulations to Acer on creating their first web novel. The story had a high quality, with a suspenseful flow of each chapter that made the novel intriguing as one read along!

It presents a compelling narrative that stands out in the cultivation genre. The protagonist's journey is both engaging and relatable, offering a refreshing take on character development. The world-building is intricate, with a rich tapestry of cultures, factions, and histories However, one aspect that might hinder the reading experience is the over-descriptive nature of certain scenes. While vivid imagery can enhance storytelling, excessive detail, especially in routine actions or settings, can disrupt the narrative flow and slow down the pacing. For instance, elaborate descriptions of mundane activities might detract from the momentum of the plot. Despite this, the novel holds significant promise. The hints at a unique power system and the protagonist's intriguing "cheat" ability are tantalizing. These elements suggest deeper layers to the story that are yet to be fully explored. As the narrative progresses, there's anticipation for these aspects to unfold, adding depth and excitement to the tale. In conclusion, it is a promising read with a strong foundation. With some refinement in pacing and descriptive balance, it has the potential to be a standout in its genre.

I think I agree with brother The_BestX, I wanted to write a review and I read his review that he just released, and I completely agree with what he said, as the description of the writer is sometimes heavy due to the abundance of description, but his style is good nevertheless, he should just decrease a little of the complex descriptions

This novel is good. The concept behind it is a bit traditional so far, but everything will depend on the world-building, power system, etc., to determine whether it will become innovative and unique or follow the conventional isekai formula. The writing style is good, and the descriptions are detailed, but the issue is that there are too many complex descriptions. Anything excessive becomes heavy instead of serving its intended purpose—this is just my personal opinion. Not many events have unfolded yet for me to evaluate other aspects, but I believe this novel has potential. Once the world-building and power system are introduced, as I mentioned, we’ll get to see its true potential and how unique it really is. That will be the deciding factor for me as to whether it becomes a great novel or just another traditional one. In the end, I wish you the best of luck, author. Good luck and much success!

Congrats to Acer on launching an epic web novel! Captivating writing style, vivid prose, and sleek layout make it a must-read! Keep shining!

Writing quality is top notch and easy to follow. Your description were amazing as well. I personally like system fantasy novel. Wish you luck, Author.

More chapters!!!! I can’t wait for more.

I really like the way it starts, especially Truck-kun🥲. I thought he was out of service really. Nice story and well written character description. It’s good. Write more Author ✍️ You deserve all the reads and powerstones.

VERY well written. The style of narration is unique and I personally enjoyed it. The characters are very interesting and the flow of the story and the world building pretty strong. A bit info dumpy in the first ferw chapters. But stick around! It's worth every second.

Very strong written quality, great story development, character designs, update stability and the world building is fantastic. highly recommend!

First time seeing an Indian isekai MC. Unlike other isekai, the mc shows his emotions, he doesn't integrate directly into the universe, we feel his sadness and how much he misses his world. As it stands it's fine, but if there is one problem it's the writing style. There are a lot of unrelated metaphors, the sentences are repetitive. At the beginning the story is more or less slow, but I imagine that is to introduce elements. Looking forward to seeing how this book evolves over time.