Moonbound: Reincarnated as a Moon Elf

I read upto like chapter 10 and i have to tell I love this story and will continue to read now.. I want to know how the journey of 42 now noctis goes on... so will he meet his other friends later in the story?

I read up to chapter 9. It was pretty good for me. The progression is good but the only problem is grammar many punctuations and letters small at the beginning of sentences but overall I give it 4.7. With .3 going for grammar mistakes. I hope u improve author I will continue reading the novel.

I'm already six chapters deep and the story keeps getting interesting. The only thing I can say is the author should recheck the punctuation. Overall I truly love the novel.

Hey! Kama here... continuing the tradition of shamelessness because why not;) First things first, to all those reading currently, Thanks a lot. You guys are lovely. :3 Even if you decide to drop, thanks a lot for giving it a try. As it is my first time creating any kind of literary work, that too in a foreign language, there are a lot of things that I lack which I try my very best to get right, but progress takes time you know... although I try to read and write more so I can give you the best of me.. Alright then what's the novel about... -It is a dark fantasy novel with a mc with a troubled past and belonging to a foreign world, thrown between constantly evolving world mythology of his new world. It features some dark themes, but not too explicit and unnecessary stuff to turn it edgy. The start is definitely a bit slow as I've given a lot of focus on establishing the mc first, so I hope you at least the first volume a try before giving a verdict, which at the time of writing isn't too far. In the end I'll clear some basic questions that you might have, -It has romance, but not too early. Also no harem. -It is not an academy novel as it is based in a medieval setting. It's a proper adventure. -It's not a dnd based novel. There might appear some similarity but it's purely coincidental. I have no knowledge of dnd to even put it in my work. -I try to post 2-3 chapters at least, everyday. For now. Alright then, thanks again, and if you have anything to ask, you can do that in the replies. 💜

first chapter looks good. The pace is perfect and the word structure flows well. Grammatically sound, as far as I can tell, doesn't bump anywhere with crisp dialogues. let's see how it goes..

It's a progression fantasy with unique take on power system, good world building and characters and organic storytelling. would love to read more chapters.