In a world where magical power defines destiny, 18-year-old Kayden Vaelaris rejects the prophecy that names him the Chosen One. Wielding both a soul bond weapon and a magic staff, he’s determined to forge his own path—one not written by fate or bloodline.
But as ancient cults rise, buried relics resurface, and rivalries ignite, Kayden finds himself caught in a web of secrets that threaten to unravel the world. To survive, he must break free from the chains that bind him—or be consumed by them.
The story is very interesting and well balanced between tones. I think you should keep going like the energizer bunny! You have potential and i hope you make it!
Story has nice pacing and the rivalry is good. The mysterious figure in the forest was dark and cool. Keep at it you have potential. Please get the other chapters out soon
So far i have been enjoying this story. For a first time writer and your first story, i think if you remain consistent you can go far. I already shared this story with my friends. Epic concept and the MC is well done.