It's a headache to read this. The grammar requires refining, and honestly, at the end of a long day and before I sleep, all I want is to relax and read a fic where I don't have to keep fixing grammatical issues in my head and figure out who is doing or saying what. I ain't got the mental energy for that.
2 months ago
50
OrdinaryWriter131
Just like light speed the plot of this story moves so fast that it’s not worth it since the story will be over in 40 chapters. I don’t care for none of the characters since I didn’t have time to even see their personalities.
a month ago
8
AKZALOTH
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a month ago
3
Animetine
honestly reads like a three year old with adhd wrote it, but it has good bones and a nice concept. the grammar is literally the only limiting factor here.
a month ago
2
SeptentrionLux
Just a shitty knockoff of the great Kizaru
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a month ago
1
MrRob0t
It's a fanfic worth reading. You won't be blown away by its high quality, but it's fun and quick to read; events move quickly, and it becomes entertaining. From what I see, it's one of this author's first fics, so we shouldn't criticize him too much; we should support him so he can write better works.
15 days ago
0
Leondro_5950
I love jjk and I’ve enjoyed this there are some grammar mistakes but if your ADHD this is a good quick pace fic about jjk and im enjoying it
It's a headache to read this. The grammar requires refining, and honestly, at the end of a long day and before I sleep, all I want is to relax and read a fic where I don't have to keep fixing grammatical issues in my head and figure out who is doing or saying what. I ain't got the mental energy for that.
Just like light speed the plot of this story moves so fast that it’s not worth it since the story will be over in 40 chapters. I don’t care for none of the characters since I didn’t have time to even see their personalities.
Reveal Spoiler
honestly reads like a three year old with adhd wrote it, but it has good bones and a nice concept. the grammar is literally the only limiting factor here.
Just a shitty knockoff of the great Kizaru ................................................................................................................................................................
It's a fanfic worth reading. You won't be blown away by its high quality, but it's fun and quick to read; events move quickly, and it becomes entertaining. From what I see, it's one of this author's first fics, so we shouldn't criticize him too much; we should support him so he can write better works.
I love jjk and I’ve enjoyed this there are some grammar mistakes but if your ADHD this is a good quick pace fic about jjk and im enjoying it
Love the story and where the story is heading