It's a headache to read this. The grammar requires refining, and honestly, at the end of a long day and before I sleep, all I want is to relax and read a fic where I don't have to keep fixing grammatical issues in my head and figure out who is doing or saying what. I ain't got the mental energy for that.
3 days ago
26
OrdinaryWriter131
Just like light speed the plot of this story moves so fast that it’s not worth it since the story will be over in 40 chapters. I don’t care for none of the characters since I didn’t have time to even see their personalities.
2 days ago
3
Leondro_5950
I love jjk and I’ve enjoyed this there are some grammar mistakes but if your ADHD this is a good quick pace fic about jjk and im enjoying it
It's a headache to read this. The grammar requires refining, and honestly, at the end of a long day and before I sleep, all I want is to relax and read a fic where I don't have to keep fixing grammatical issues in my head and figure out who is doing or saying what. I ain't got the mental energy for that.
Just like light speed the plot of this story moves so fast that it’s not worth it since the story will be over in 40 chapters. I don’t care for none of the characters since I didn’t have time to even see their personalities.
I love jjk and I’ve enjoyed this there are some grammar mistakes but if your ADHD this is a good quick pace fic about jjk and im enjoying it
Love the story and where the story is heading