【Villain, book-crossing, story plot flow】
Wang Teng accidentally obtained the system of the great villain of the universe and crossed into the world of pirates, becoming Kaido, one of the Four Emperors.
From then on, an all-out war broke out in the world of One Piece!
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It started off really good and I had high hopes. Then the moment other transmigrators appeared in the story it tanked almost immediately. The story completly derailed and become unsustainable. Truly tragic, it’s like the author just gave up. It would be worth a rewrite if the author can cut out the other transmigrators, dao, and form a better long term vision for the novel.
Well, what can I say. When I first saw it was a fanfic about Kaido I was thrilled to start it. At first the story was good but then. I don't want to sound mean but, how can you mess up a story that bad.