The SAGE Protocol

Really liked the first and third chapters, they were great. The others felt a bit slow in comparison, but overall I still enjoyed it. I'm excited to see where the story goes from here

Absolutely hooked from the first paragraph. That god was hilarious in a dark, sarcastic way, and the concept of a civil engineer with an AI in a fantasy world is genius. Can’t wait to see him build stuff and change the world from scratch.

This is a review to boost me to 10 reviews. Once i get 10 reviews the novel gets an overall rating boosting it's visibility. This review will be removed once no longer required. 3

This is a review to boost me to 10 reviews. Once i get 10 reviews the novel gets an overall rating boosting it's visibility. This review will be removed once no longer required. 2

This is a review to boost me to 10 reviews. Once i get 10 reviews the novel gets an overall rating boosting it's visibility. This review will be removed once no longer required.

Fantastic premise and immersive writing. The god's personality sold the opening for me. Small nitpick: some of the paragraphs could be a little shorter for readability, but overall, this has huge potential.

Interesting premise, but the chapter felt a bit long for an intro. Some of the exposition dragged. Still, I’m intrigued by the setup and want to see what he does with the tech knowledge.

Pretty good. I like the realism and attention to detail, especially with the AI’s input. The dialogue could be snappier though. Still, it's different in a good way.

Good idea, but I wasn’t super into all the technical bits. I get what it’s going for, but I’m more into fast-paced action or magic. I’ll give it a few more chapters though.