Victors Quill

the story was nice. and I hooked up on it. please continue your work

An enjoyable novel. I especially liked the power system—this point-based system feels unique and distinctive. The concept and story behind the novel also don’t seem traditional; instead, they stand out compared to others. The writing style is beautiful and conveys emotions skillfully. I just found that, at times, the descriptions and examples are a bit overdone in succession, which ends up having the opposite effect of what’s intended—it makes the reading feel slightly heavy and dull. But that only happens a few times. I also liked the presence of internal monologues in the novel, though I wish there were more of them instead of relying heavily on third-person narration to express thoughts and emotions. I believe that would be more effective. That’s all! I wish you the best of luck and success, author. Good luck!

This has been an incredibly enjoyable read so far, I’ve read up to chapter 16 (latest chapter at the time of this review) I love the action so far, its incredibly gripping and intense, with vivid descriptions. It’s fun imagining the fights through Kael, especially with how descriptive it’s been so far. Another main point I’ve found is simply the world building, it feels like effort and thought has been put into every aspect of the world, with much more to be unveiled. But… the best part so far is, no isekai, no harem, no overpowered abilities, just the main character trying to survive against all odds. If you are looking for a novel that has great world building, character design, dialogue, and is entertaining and gripping, you should absolutely be reading this! Please keep writing author!

what a breathe of fresh plot. its always great to see realistic powers use in daily life that goes wrong because they should go wrong, specially if its kids that awaken them. very surprising twist, no warnings, no signs, just bam! bestfriend pool of red soup. mc traumatized for life, so refreshing. well the length of chapters are on the smaller side but they gradulallygot longer. not much world building yet aside from environment being abandoned building. still early but full of potential. cant wait to read more!

I’m really enjoying this, it feels like I’ve found a diamond while searching for gold! I like how it’s different, unique and mostly not another isekai… I can tell lots of thought has been put into this, all that’s left is to hope we get constant updates! POV: Author writing Victor’s Quill

This hits hard from the very first chapter. The mix of chaos, grief, and unraveling power is haunting and beautiful. I'm hooked...

Great So far! The story is very unique and not the same thing you see everyday. It's not your average action adventure fantasy regression and it makes it very clear and has unique perspective and ideas. Great overall!

Where do I even begin, this novel has been an absolute blast. The character interactions although there are just a few for now have been amazing, I love the power system so much as well, it’s unique haven’t seen something like it before. Gives a unique spin on just “regular superpowers” the fight scenes have been really well done, descriptions have been nothing short of amazing. IF YOU WANT A REALLY GOOD READ I HAVE TO RECCOMEND THIS PLEASE KEEP POSTING!!! (Below is author writing this)