Unusual Adventure
Author: RANDOOM_Writter
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Jacob Bennett, a man full of lofty ambitions, spent all his money inside a casino, and woke up with a debt of 42 billion dollars.
So his uncle forcefully send him back to he's parents farm in the train, when his about to board the train that leads to his home town, instead he rides the wrong train and transports him to the City of HUNTERS.
Would our hero would finds it's way to pay his debt, or go back home and live as a farmer?
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An honest to god review from yours truly, Verz Verx Verzara. Don't be demotivated and continue writing newbie writer! Writing Quality: The overall writing quality of this novel is decent, with little to no particular errors in grammar. BUT, you must improve the structure of your novel. There are errors in pauses and sentence structures that I've seen. It looks like you are rushing and/or trying to cram as much information in one paragraph or sentence. But either way, your writing quality is decent taking into account that you're a new writer. Story Development: I can't say much here because there's only 3 chapters right now. But what I can say though is that in the prologue, we started at the PoV of the alien race. They somehow knew how humans came to know of mana crystals specifically. Which is probably a plot hole... I don't know. Author better patch this hole up :3 Character Design: I have not much comment as there's no chapters to see character development etc. Update Stability: Only 3 chapters so far. I will update this review after you pump out more chapters World Background: Now this! This one is very interesting. Because the general worldview of this novel is very good and intriguing. Keep up the good work author I'd like to see more. Overall 4.6 stars for you ;3