Return of the Flamebound Oathkeeper
Having been born in the Outlands of the Noxio Federation, Luciel fought every day to survive, hoping life could be less awful. One day, he received a strange and fateful dream, awakening the dormant scarlet flame within him, and became a Resonator—an elite group of people who were blessed with inhuman powers.
But his power was different from everyone else's. The flame was sentient, and the opposite of him. His soul was struck by its powerful oath of the past. It even had the Soul Inscription—a rune system measuring his soul.
As he marched across nations and the Shattered Realm, haunted by memories he couldn't grasp, he'd soon find out the origin of himself and the ruined worlds. What could be lying beyond the truth and hiding behind the lies? His destiny was far beyond what he could've imagined. Awaken! Humanity's Flame. Show the world your way of salvation. See your flaming oath to the end!
'In salvation lies not a god, but a vow etched in fire.
To walk forward is to burn—
to burn is to live.
He who rises from ash and awakens the first flame
shall remember the [Scarlet Oath].'
Hey yall! Shameless author 5 star rating here. Just a quick note that it would probably be considered a slow burn. The world building is deep and the system ties to the MC's emotional and spiritual development. So if y'all come in and expect a normal system, it's not. It might be volatile at times, but that is exactly how it is. You'll understand when you read it! Still, I'm a novice so it might not flesh out as well as I hope it would be, but I promise the premise is really good! So I'd appreciate all comments to help improve my novel.
The grammar is very smooth! The mystery and suspense is present continuously, and the power system is quite interesting. I especially liked the [Verses] that's quite cool and has a lot of potential on usage. The development seems to go for a slow burn. And the world seems like the post apocalyptic if I'm right. Overall, I recommend reading it, on rainy nights especially!
It’s really good story keep it up !! Will be waiting for more updates!![img=recommend]
The story is well written and clearly expresses the emotions of the characters and the descriptions are well written. And the story as a whole seems to be well planned!!!