[ PS - This is only for entertainment purpose and I don't want to hurt anyone's beliefs and religion. So if you have any problems with these then please don't read further. ]
Authors don't worry about hurting people's beliefs as it will limit your creativity.
Second,please take down the diclamer from the synopsis place as it's a place for writing synopsis, not make pussies feel good and I hate when some authors do that as it shows you insecure with your work.
Overall, there is nothing to write about the story yet as there are only two chapters available and I haven't even read them yet. I just felt compelled to write this review because the other guy who did it said something I didn't liked. He said that the author is going to offend people because of R-18 stuff. First of all he doesn't seem that well informed about Mahabharat., then he should go and learn more about Mahabharat. Mahabharat is not for kids man and Mahabharat was one of the most brutal battle. Mahabharat has more gore than even novels known for their gore, and he is saying the author should write it for under 18. I mean come on man, do you really want a good story to be ruined because the author can't kill a man now. Normally I don't bother writing reviews or comments but I decided to write it because there are so few novels on India history and I want to see where this one goes.
Finally in my opinion the author shouldn't change what he wants to write because of people's opinions and should let his creativity fully out.
12 days ago
27
YouDontNeed2Know
Dangerous. You are treading on bery dangerous grounds. Hope you don't get burned. Don't write R-18 in this fic.
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12 days ago
12
Parthiban_G
The author has nailed the MC personality, which should be suited for the era. If MC had been proud or battle hungry, it wouldn't sit well with gods of that era. Even though it is a little bit dull and predictable cliche sometimes , it is an interesting story in that timeline.
7 days ago
8
Sparingstar1
Author just continue doing what you love and don't care about others opinions this is a good story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
11 days ago
7
DarkShadow95
This is an amazing work. pls continue with it.
8 days ago
3
Clay_Olivet
Brother please bring at least 2-3 chapters a day 🙏🙏🙏🙏
4 days ago
2
Prince_Arsalan
i hope author can continue upload more chapters of this fan-fic and not drop it.
5 days ago
1
Dr_Absent_Minded
I am a regular reader of all your novels.
i like the fact that you don't drag your feet with story.
i am aware of the ai involvement of your fanfics
but can you try to reduce the repetition that's happening too much because of it.
like in a group discussion when someone is being praised by a group only one needs to do it and the other can agree to it in a few words a whole para is not needed.
there are several instances like that but since the story has a fast pace regardless I find very endurable so keep at it either way. you are doing a good job...
6 days ago
1
Daoisty_star
Great work this far....hope u don't drop this as I'm very much looking forward to this plot
7 days ago
1
helical_chaos
Good work. Don't drop it and update it regularly.
19 hours ago
0
Poke_writer
This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________
21 hours ago
0
Passerby
Good work, author. There are very few Hindu mythological-based fanfictions; among those, yours is the best work.
a day ago
0
Parthiban_G
Well, recent chapters reflect authors' weaknesses - the use of AI for dialogues, which gives a bland and cringe feel.
Authors don't worry about hurting people's beliefs as it will limit your creativity. Second,please take down the diclamer from the synopsis place as it's a place for writing synopsis, not make pussies feel good and I hate when some authors do that as it shows you insecure with your work. Overall, there is nothing to write about the story yet as there are only two chapters available and I haven't even read them yet. I just felt compelled to write this review because the other guy who did it said something I didn't liked. He said that the author is going to offend people because of R-18 stuff. First of all he doesn't seem that well informed about Mahabharat., then he should go and learn more about Mahabharat. Mahabharat is not for kids man and Mahabharat was one of the most brutal battle. Mahabharat has more gore than even novels known for their gore, and he is saying the author should write it for under 18. I mean come on man, do you really want a good story to be ruined because the author can't kill a man now. Normally I don't bother writing reviews or comments but I decided to write it because there are so few novels on India history and I want to see where this one goes. Finally in my opinion the author shouldn't change what he wants to write because of people's opinions and should let his creativity fully out.
Dangerous. You are treading on bery dangerous grounds. Hope you don't get burned. Don't write R-18 in this fic. .............. ..............
The author has nailed the MC personality, which should be suited for the era. If MC had been proud or battle hungry, it wouldn't sit well with gods of that era. Even though it is a little bit dull and predictable cliche sometimes , it is an interesting story in that timeline.
Author just continue doing what you love and don't care about others opinions this is a good story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is an amazing work. pls continue with it.
Brother please bring at least 2-3 chapters a day 🙏🙏🙏🙏
i hope author can continue upload more chapters of this fan-fic and not drop it.
I am a regular reader of all your novels. i like the fact that you don't drag your feet with story. i am aware of the ai involvement of your fanfics but can you try to reduce the repetition that's happening too much because of it. like in a group discussion when someone is being praised by a group only one needs to do it and the other can agree to it in a few words a whole para is not needed. there are several instances like that but since the story has a fast pace regardless I find very endurable so keep at it either way. you are doing a good job...
Great work this far....hope u don't drop this as I'm very much looking forward to this plot
Good work. Don't drop it and update it regularly.
This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________This is very good story _____________________
Good work, author. There are very few Hindu mythological-based fanfictions; among those, yours is the best work.
Well, recent chapters reflect authors' weaknesses - the use of AI for dialogues, which gives a bland and cringe feel.
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Yoooo !! I have wanted a Mahabharat fanfic lol