In The Hands of Fools

Biased review of course, I know that I have much to work on, however I feel that I have put a lot of effort into building out this world and fleshing out the characters. My goal is to have the reader on the edge of their seat after each and every chapter, and I hope you guys can give me the feedback necessary to do that.

To be honest, your cover and title is quite intriguing. Since it really fit my novel theme. So I thought that yours might have similar theme with my novel. I read it and find the genre kinda different with mine. Personally Im not a fan of pov style, other than that your wording, description on a certain scene too long, like the one you do at the start of each chapter. I do admit, I also write it like that to increases the length of the story but yours, its too poetic for me. So find myself, tend to skip most of that part. Well, it just my own self thought. Im new to writting so maybe your style might actually good, I myself dont know. Anyway, great story and keep up the good work. Feel free to check mine too.