Shadow Slave alternate paths: The sun of song

shameless author here, I would recommend this to all shadow slave fans, I'm making it as lore as accurate as possible (mistakes here and there, so feel free to correct me). Lmk what you think about it!

Currently on Chapter 8 while writing this: Up untill now the story has been very interesting, the premise allows for good character interactions and the way they talk and behave feels very true to their characters in the actual novel

Can’t yet talk about story development as the time im writing this review its on chp 8 but the idea of this is pretty interesting with a lot of room for new characters or even new relationships with the original characters alternatively the current writing feels like its going at a good pace while setting up for a different development for Sunny from a new sleeper into a somewhat experienced one.

The beginning is great it’s sets up how sunny gets adopted and shows nice interactions between him and the saints of song.

A rather original story, very well written and a good start to the narrative. I recommend reading it, you won't waste your time.

Very good story, I'm just wondering who would get together with Sunny? On that note, I wish you all the best in your fanfic, and I hope you don't drop it.