The Genjutsu Devil of Konoha
After his battle with Sora in the royal palace, Aizen soul was transported to the Naruto Universe, he was given a second chance, in this life, he was Seijuro Kuruma, the heir to the Kuruma clan, a prodigy like no other, no one could stand up to him.
This time, he shall take the other path, hopefully he doesn't end up lonely once more.
Follow him on his journey as he used Genjutsu in order to defeat all of his opponent.
"Onoki....since when were you under the impression that you were fighting me"
"Killer B, did you really believe you could avoid my Genjutsu simply by being a perfect jinchuriki"
Turning entire battlefield into a blood bath.
"Reality is only what you perceive... but what happens when your perception is mine to control? In that moment, even truth becomes a lie you swear by."
A/N This is my first attempt at writing a naruto story so please understand that, and also a smart character, I am not saying all my character are dumb I am saying the fact that Seijuro is smart will be very in your face, if he make a mistake its either 100% my fault, or he made that mistake on purpose.
Remember this a second chance story, so do not expect a full Aizen, sure he would act like him sometime, might even human experiment, but this version is different.
As usual, none of those characters belong to me; they belong to their rightful owners, Kishimoto for Naruto and Sensei Kubo for Aizen. All I own is the character Seijuro.
Okay so first two weeks are done, this story is like my first ever naruto story, so I am learning as I go, the further on you are the less mistake you shall notice. Also spoiler warning some stuff from Boruto will be used in this, like the Otsutsuki and Karma. I am using the same writing style I use for the Quincy and hollow story. As for love interest, originally it was only going to be Mikoto, but now it’s Mikoto and Kushina as of me writing this. And I simply wish you enjoy this story.
Ohh it's finally here!!! Aizen 2nd life after being cut in half by his beloved group project called Sora. Note: Here's your Michelin star bro!
Perfect! Literally everything is perfect here, there is no too op power, but at the same time the hero has his trump card. The grammar is good, the world is written perfectly, the characters are not yet revealed, but they are also at an excellent level. Keep going, author, and good luck
Really enjoying it author, only gripe is if you could put ' whens hes thinking might make it read smoother but like the character, happy you havent completely replicated Aizen, he still has childish times and possible romantic ties feels more real.
Great start. A genjutsu-fuinjutsu combo is a unique power system.
a única reclamação que eu tenho é quanto a linha do tempo já que algumas coisas estão estranhas, pra não dizer erradas, por exemplo, hiruzen sendo Hokage antes da segunda guerra ninja, mas fora isso tá boa
as usual the author delivers absolute PEAK , writing style is fun to read and dialogue is great , hope it stays fun for the whole story