My Hero Academia: The Dragon's Quirk
An ordinary young man from Earth dies in an accident and is reborn in the world of My Hero Academia. However, he is not gifted with a Quirk, but rather a power from a brutal and living otherworld: Incursio, a dragon armor that grants him incredible power at the cost of excruciating pain and the risk of losing his humanity.
With the memories of two lives, he enrolls in U.A. High under the name Tatsumi, hiding the true nature of his dangerous powers. He must navigate a competitive school life, form complex alliances, and face the threat of the League of Villains he knows from his past "stories."
His situation is further complicated when ghosts from the world of Incursio begin to appear, led by a legendary assassin, Akame, who has an unexpected connection to the soul residing within his armor. Caught between his duties as an aspiring hero, his hunt for the mysterious assassin organization Yozakura, and an internal war to control the "dragon" within him, Tatsumi must fight not only to protect his new world, but also to find his true self at the crossroads of two destinies.
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All characters, settings, and original storylines from Akame Ga Kill and My Hero Academia belong to Takahiro and Kohei Horikoshi. I receive no financial benefit from writing this story. This work is purely created by fans for fans.
What do you expect, this is my story of course give top rating.For the story, it might be slow but it might also be fast So just enjoy it and if you don't like it please go back and find another type of novel I'm just practicing here
I made this review as a marker for new readers in the future, namely this novel is a fan-fiction made by me and practicing so I can guarantee that in volume 1 the writing style of the story is very strange and makes many people unable to stand it. I will not deny because when I read it I also felt strange so I improved it in the following volume remember in the following volume not in the revision of the chapter that I made because I want to see the development of the story that I made from strange to according to my criteria. so what I can say is if you hold on at the beginning the story will get better at the end I even like it even though there are still some small mistakes in each chapter such as some repetition of words but the rest is quite good. so that's all I want to say. :3
Boring novel with a pathetic protagonist and an incredibly stupid author, who decided to leave the protagonist without powers in such important arcs as the first class test, the heroes vs villains battle and the first appearance of Nomu, it bores me, and I'm not interested in how it develops later, you didn't manage to catch me even before 10 chapters, I wonder what was going through your head when writing about this garbage?
This is just pure nonsense, characters that don't act as they should, enigmatic titles, lots of drama, it follows the plot a lot, almost like an insertion, but what can you do, right?
I'm going to give it a bad rating because it's clickbait, it says in the description tatsumi the one who is reborn not a person in tatsumi's body, just because of that and that it's very cliché the rebirth I'll give bad review. .s....s.....
Hope I don’t regret the rating, I’m letting it marinate before consumption. I’ll read it maybe around 100 chapters. You can also go further with his quirk, like instead of just adaptation and evolution he starts being able to absorb quirk factors through blood and adding it into his quirk factor, like how Izuku does it from the fanfiction - Blood For The Blood God by Ryujin Maoi, it would give Tatsumi some diversity.
Hmm not bad continue because tatsumi being an MC is quite rare and incursio power in my opinion is one of the most interesting power to develop
this fiction in my eyes is mildly annoying, it doesn't immediately scream bad fanfic. but it is getting bad and builds up over time. it feel like you read a shonen fanfic but the world around MC is angst and melodramatic romance feel you want to puke, it feel like artificial sugar kind of drama. The author himself seems to have a hard time making MC matters so he makes every other characters look at MC with a rosy filter. everything he did suddenly surprised everyone and praised him like a fated born genius who appears every 1000 years. he even cheated in the sport festival for convenience of plot. like seriously why even people surprise when armor appears in his hand? it is his quirk, it is not like everyone knows he has an uncontrollable quirk.
I don't like this writing style. Your intelligent characters are just robots. They speak and act like machines, not humans. Descriptions are weird and internal dialogues of other characters are completely off from original. Mc is both childish(goals and idols) and robotic (again - that's not how you write intelligence), which feels extremely strange.
I liked the premise, it would be cool if it had the characters from Akame ga Kill too , I hope for dragonization too hehe
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It has a lot of potential but I don’t like how the main character acts like a little kid and then befriends a little girl whilst he’s building a tower out of blocks?!
hmm... how should a say this... the writing felt like it wasn't written by human. too "robotic", I guess. no separator or a hint when changing characters' pov. because of the writing style, the story development kinda feels "boring". it's like reading a history log rather than a novel. the novel (the concept) had potential tho. my advice is just to completely rewrite the entire Novel. but in the end, it's up to you
Well, what can I say? I stopped reading at Chapter 10 because it gave me the feeling of how pathetic Mc was going to do. He lost total resistance against small-time villains to the point where the one who won was Momo. His duration and power seem nerfed since you make it seem like the fight lasted less than 10 minutes. He asked me [I'm not going to read more] how much Buff you'll have to give the Mc to match an Izuku with more than 20% control of his Quirk.