Hogwarts: Becoming the White Lord from Breathing
Author: Horizon_s
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1991, England.
The summer heat is at its peak, the sun shines through the clouds onto the streets and alleys, and the air is filled with a damp smell.
Sacred Heart of God, an ordinary orphanage located in the Muggle world.
Damon White sat in a rocking chair, leaning lazily on the back of the chair, like a retired old man, his eyes half-closed, lazily looking at the children chasing and playing in the yard.
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mtl name bro -.............
well it's not bad but the transformation needs more work as for the story it self just what you expect from a Chinese translation good creativity in terme of powers and the system consept but still the characters are just npcs to praise how handsome and powerful the mc is . As the most annoying part for me is the the pacing of each paragraph and there is some random space between words from time to time and finally you can expect what kind of plot from a boy named "the boy who survived a catastrophe "
fix the margins man its the only part of the fic that irritates me other then that good work mate
its promising but the translation is hella mid along with the spacing of the paragraphs. Also some conversations are not emphasized with (") . overall just shut down ur brain and read