Vyendir, the world of mysterious Midnighters who gain supernatural powers when the cold moon embraces them.
Anieal Starborne, the youngest daughters of the Starborne family finds herself admits the schemes of these mysterious beings.
An accident caused by those very midnighters leads her to become a Midnighter herself, However, she was much more than a simple Midnighter after all she obtained the ability to gaze upon the threads of fate and materialize them in physical world.
Now determined than ever Anieal Starborne uses her power over threads be it physical or spiritual to weave through the mysteries of her world as she tries to reach her goals. But, one who gazes upon fate can't stay the same...
The prose is clean and vivid, especially in how it builds mood and inner conflict. The writing quality is good the only problem author has is with emotions they are a bit stiff but that can be worked on. the story development is also very nice you feel its not very past paced but not very slow poked also its balanced character designs are also very good they have a very nice bond world is cold and mystical just like how the author wanted so im probably going to read it in the future as well!
it's great, short and fast paced, i like it, a lot of interesting elements, definitely would be bingeing it one day when i have the time. Good job author!!
Pretty good so far. Its has subtle mystery elements which I like. The chapter formatting can be improved. I hope the story goes deep in the psychological aspect.