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When Jacob suddenly found himself thrust into a new world, trapped inside the body of Dorian Aurelian, the failed son of the baron lord, he was left with two choices.
To either find a way to fix the horrible reputation Dorian had accumulated over the years and also improve the terrible state of the barony, or live the rest of his life remembered as a failure.
Jacob chose the first option, quickly accepting his life as the new character he was transmigrated into.
Luckily for him, he was blessed with certain skills to help make his journey easier.
[Congratulations on your transmigration.]
[You have gained a new skill.]
[Resource Gathering:] Description: This skill allows you to locate any resources you wish to find.
'Find me iron ore.'
[13 Iron ores have been located 13km away from here.]
With the help of his multi-tasked system, Dorian/Jacod begins his journey, conquering land, enemies, and beauties as well.
Getting to 100 chapters, I feel I should now drop my honest review about their book. Do I think it's a 10/10? Most likely not. Do I think it's worth the shot? Yes, for sure. The MC is one that makes decisions based on a long-run investment plan, which is why you notice sometimes his decisions look rash until later. Yes, I crafted my MC for this sole purpose; he is not perfect, and he has flaws as well. As for the harem aspect, MC has only three main wives, four if I feel like it. And of the three, one is not truly someone he loves. A lot of women love him, but he doesn't feel the same about them. As such, do not expect an MC that sleeps with just anyone. Moving on, my updates are steady, even more steady when I receive motivation from you guys, so don't be shy. If there are any questions, do ask down below.
It's a really fun start hope the author keeps up the good work just one question about the harem will it have yuri elements or no hopefully not I'm tired of Harem always turning love interest into lesbian or bi it always ruins the harem
Is there really no proper explanation for the ranking system, or did I just miss it? The story keeps saying that only the Hero has reached the Lord Rank, making Maria the second person in the entire world to achieve it so why is she portrayed so weak? It makes absolutely no sense. If Dorian's barony has one Lord Rank and three Master Ranks, why are they somehow terrified of going to war with a mere Viscount, whose strongest fighter let's ASSUME that is only a Grandmaster? Shouldn’t a Lord Rank be overwhelmingly superior? The way the novel presents it, the Lord Rank feels like nothing but decoration. Even if Maria isn’t fully stable yet in her new realm, she should still logically be one of the strongest people in the kingdom if not the whole world since only she and the Hero have reached that tier. The numbers simply don’t add up. This inconsistency in the power system makes the worldbuilding feel shallow and sometimes downright illogical. If ranks don’t mean anything in actual conflict and characters don’t act according to their stated power levels, then what’s the point of having the ranking system at ALL? It even feels like the Mc is stronger than Maria 🤦
The author doesn't know how to write a good harem from the 3 heroines introduced so far MCs sister & mercent girl even MC seem like cheap side btch then fl /MC come on author give them some thoughts backgrounds and dipper reason behind their actions/character they don't seem human at all just some random NPC of random chapters of a novel.Why the need to rush!? give them some time to make readers understand them & like them.I recommend you to read some harem novels to understand the pov of readers to write a good novel.
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Translation is absolutely abysmal. This novel seriously needs a competent editor. On top of that, the writing is rather cartoonish.
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Thanks For The Book 😁🥂📖🍾🏁 Looking Forward for the Next Chapters 😎🍔📖🍟🍻
I am working on chapter 120 right now and felt the need to take a pause in order to submit a review of the novel that I am reading free, for 24 hours. I am going to take an educated guess that the sentence structure and dialog were repaired, and translated better, since I found absolutely nothing wrong with any of it. This is coming from an audiobook bibliophile, who gets irritated by broken english, poor editing, and half-assed translations that never seem to convert to english. I have my pet peeves though, like an overuse of the same repedative word(s) like " Old Man" 30 times in a chapter, and "Is that so" in literally EVERY characters dialog. Speaking of character differentials, they all possess the same sort of personality, and dialog options, making the world emersion difficult at times, when the reader has to be told WHO is speaking those lines. OVERALL though, with my personal dialog issues aside, this really IS a pleasant world to dive into, including the unique characters that get added to the story, like sprinkling spices into a mix, just to add some well earned flavor.
The start is a cheap copy of the Greatest estate developer. The premise is good but there are multiple issues. First is about grammar and strange nonsense dialogue. Second that author has done zero work on economics or power scaling/structure of world. eg. baroness can barely afford one gold coin while 1000 gold coins are enough for commoner to sustain for some time. Mc earns trillions of coins from dragon iron ore. there are too many plot holes and inconsistency. power levels: adept, master, grandmaster, lord. Now we are told that lord rank is from fairy tails. Every other small character you see will be master rank. So, literally there is no proper power structure for the world. Also somehow supposed lord rank cannot truly overpower a master rank just for convenience. Then one incident that was major red flag was that some knight tried to assasinate mc. But no there was not even an apology for the failed attempt. Mc didn't even show a reaction to the fact. It was like some trash gag comedy scene. Well I gave it a try but there were too many plotholes and very bad dialogues.
I'm not too deep in but I'm enjoying the imperfect MC. There's a lot of character development and him and other side characters. great job and I look forward to the rest.
I have enjoyed reading this book and look forward to upcoming chapters. I have felt some situations between chapters can be clarified more, but overall, this book has kept my interest. The Characters are interesting, and the development has been fun to follow as they grow.
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This was a very interesting and non stop read that kept me on edge and begging for more, hard to put down once you dive into it, the build up is uniquely written, the characters are someone you would love to meet and learn more about them in a more intimate detail
Love this read it has kept me on edge with every read, looking forward towards the ending, I hope to read in more detail about the other side characters and hope they have very interesting back stories more relatable to the story…