My Hero Academia: Gura Gura no Mi

Hello everyone, hope you’re all doing well. I wanted to share a My Hero Academia crossover I found and ended up enjoying a lot more than I expected. At first, the premise sounds like pure chaos: someone is reborn in MHA with the power of the Gura Gura no Mi. But once the story gets going, it actually becomes a really fun mix of U.A. training, class rivalries, hero society, villains, and that classic shonen feeling of watching someone shake up a world that thought it already knew its limits. What I liked most is that it doesn’t take forever to get moving. The protagonist gets involved with the main cast early, the fights are entertaining, and the crossover elements give the story a different flavor without completely losing the MHA setting. I decided to bring it here so more readers can enjoy it too. I’ll be personally handling the editing and revision to keep the English smooth and readable, since rough translations often lose a lot of the original flow. The original novel is already completed, so updates should be steady. Original Title: 学院之震震果实 Author: 八百万百 Hope you enjoy the ride.

interesting idea but horrible execution. You can see Ai being used but that isn't the issue , you can edit the parts out to make it seem less Ai. Also mc's lack of personality is another issue. He is so bland and not really interesting to read. I've read 10 chapters , among them half of the writings is just filled with non stop glazing. everyone is just awe of him. It was fine till a certain part but after that it was just pure annoyance. Overall, a bad story

Well, the idea is good, but the application is bad. If it's not AI, people around you forget many things, like the fact that he's a swordsman, and everything is rushed without development. It really needs a review...

Some use AI to write, others translate Chinese fanfiction. This time it feels like it was written by Chinese AI and translated into English.

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I just come back to this shite web to check if theres something good after 2 months not reading novels- then only to be reminded to why i stop reading on this shite in the first place. the first novel i saw in the popular section is this I.A garbage somehow.

In the realm of modern popular fiction, there is a distinct difference between a chef who lacks experience and a machine that lacks a soul. Today, we find ourselves staring at a dish that seems to suffer from the worst of both worlds—a concoction so synthetic, so hurried, and so fundamentally hollow that it tastes less like literature and more like digital grease. We are forced to dissect a work where the rich, thematic tapestry of My Hero Academia is violently blended with the stolen treasures of One Piece, resulting in something utterly unpalatable. Consider the opening sequence—a moment that should establish the weight of a narrative. Instead, we are treated to a farce. The protagonist fractures the very air with a stolen devil fruit power, uttering dialogue so painfully juvenile it curdles the blood. But the true offense is the staggering structural incompetence. We are told this character has inhabited this world for fourteen long years. Yet, when he stands in a public mall, he reacts to his own existence with the confused novelty of a man who arrived five minutes ago. There is no history here; there is no roots, no weight, no passage of time. There is only the frantic scratching of an author desperate to reach the next action sequence. Then, the script demands a crisis. Naturally, the universe obliges by recycling a "Sludge Villain"—not the one that forged a symbol of peace, but a convenient duplicate, conveniently stronger, for the sole purpose of making our protagonist appear "cooler." It is the narrative equivalent of a chef dumping cheap truffles onto a burnt steak to justify the price. And the imagery! A fourteen-year-old child straining on his tiptoes to patronize a two-meter-tall All Might, whispering phrases that belong in a schoolyard rather than an epic. It is not profound; it is deeply, embarrassingly absurd. Many in the dining hall have whispered that this work bears the distinct, greasy fingerprints of Artificial Intelligence—perhaps even a machine translation of an already automated Chinese template. I am inclined to agree. "AI does not create; it mimics. It takes the shapes of things it has seen—a swordsman's blade, a hero's quote, a crowd's awe—and throws them into a blender without the slightest understanding of why those elements mattered in the first place." This explains the total amnesia of the supporting cast. The people inhabiting this world forget the protagonist is a swordsman from one chapter to the next. They possess no memory, no internal life, no agency. They exist for one solitary, exhausting purpose: to stand in a circle and glaze a blank slate of a main character. To watch a universe stop spinning just to marvel at a flawless, personality-free void is not entertainment. It is a chore. There are those who offer gentle praise, calling it "commendable for a new writer" and wishing for future growth. I admire their charity. But a critic's tongue must remain sharp. The idea of combining these grand universes has merit, but the execution here is a disaster of pacing and prose. Everything is rushed; nothing is developed. It is a childish, automated illusion of a story—a plate of aesthetic plastic served in place of a meal. For the sheer audacity of its laziness, it deserves nothing more than the bargain bin of the digital age.

I read this and, since I was too lazy to write the review, I copied a pretty accurate one. interesting idea but horrible execution. You can see Ai being used but that isn't the issue , you can edit the parts out to make it seem less Ai. Also mc's lack of personality is another issue. He is so bland and not really interesting to read. I've read 15 chapters , among them half of the writings is just filled with non stop glazing. everyone is just awe of him. It was fine till a certain part but after that it was just pure annoyance. Overall, a bad story

The word count is too low and the plot is skewered through to show off the mc's powers. The execution of plot and powers along with the description of scenes are too amateur. The whole thing looks quite childish but for a new author it's commendable. Hope he keeps grinding to one day write a masterpiece.

I absolutely love this story!!! The writing is good, the character is good. honestly it is wonderful, tho I do have one remark which I mean doesn't entirely matter right now because the story is in the early stages, but you might lose some audience who are die hard MHA fans if you don't involve Midoriya more. It's not that big of a deal right now because the story is just beginning, but when it gets to the later part's people who are huge MHA fans will definitely want to see Midoriya using One For All to beat some people up, especially Tomura. But truly I love it and I don't mind that Midoriya isn't too involved, this is just me thinking of those people who love the canon story and might want to see a little of that introduced.

Olha, a ideia realmente é boa. Mais colocou IA, então parece que os personagens esquecem as habilidades do protagonista, além de cenas exageradas e rápidas. As lutas são mal escritas e tudo gira em volta do protagonista muito rapidamente, a personalidade do protagonista é amena e sem graça.

mc has no personality and consistency so many moments wasted underestimate - shock - "hmm interesting" ah story

The whole point of the novel is just to glazed the MC that lacks any personality Just from the early chapter its like a chinese fanfic with the overly handsome MC etc just from repeating that Mc was so handsome made me the urge to just drop it but I still tried reading but it doesnt really get better, and whats with the sludge villain with absorbing quirk of others by absorbing the users, like how was that out of AFO radar and other heroes didnt ever take it to consideration Would have been better if he focus his haki and zoro’s swordsmanship and just like hide the gura gura no mi. Atleast there if he ever has a breaking point he will reveal his other powers So to summarize its just over glazing the MC while the all the character from BNHA just go wow he is so handsome, wow he is so strong or stronger the all might etc

Yeah, I expected more. I barely managed to get through three chapters; I thought things might improve later on, but after skimming through the rest—skipping several chapters at a time—I still didn't find any changes for the better. It’s dry, bland, and clichéd.[img=disgusted]