Mage System in a Martial World

I can already feel that this is something that would be featured on RoyalRoad that stars off good. But then ends up being dropped later on due to lack of creativity from the Author and lack of motivation... Good luck anyway Author!

What the **** how can somebody think of a story like this mage system thing i am really curious of how it turns out 🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈 i wonder what Will happen

Hope for more chapter, cause I'm kinda curious what will happen to this mage in cultivation word. Now what I'm curious is 1. MC use Western name Adam. Will the other cultivator use Western name too or eastern name?. 2. Is Mana same as qi? 3. Did the system have its own personality? 4. Is it truck-kun that cause Adam death? I mean did the car can be considered as truck-kun? Well, for now this piqued my curiosity so thanks for your hardwork author!

Man I did not read your novel but I really like the description. But after reading the reviews I noticed that you must have dropped it 3 months ago. I hope you get to improve and try to make this novel from the beggining, your idea is really good. I'll not try to read it thought, don't have much time to read and they said very clearly that for now it's not worth reading. Keep up the good work! Noticed that your native language is not English. Maine you should try to write in your native language and find someone good to translate it for you. Best regards!

This novel really interested me a lot but it has disappointed me by being dropped, although many similar ones are available i really wanted to continue reading this, ;-;. It's just kinda sad to see it dropped.

Good potential but need more chapters. I like the idea of a magic system in a martial world but in the future will the mc combined the magic from the system with the martial arts of this world to fix a mages greatest weakness or will he be one of those mcs that make the system do everything.

like the story and the idea mostly there is this AI and "i am being experimentet on" storyline in novels with a "Mage" system or ofcourse aour typical Isekai story, so i think this novel is a good and fresh addition my library hoping good things and goot luck dear author

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I like the idea of the story, it is kinda refreshing to have a mage system in a cultivator world but i do hope that the author will stick to this and do not ever put a sword or palm or whatever technique on this novel bc im pretty tired of novel which starts off with mage like ability and suddenly abandoned it and be a fighter

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Mage in martial world.. Neet... Wakaka look fun.. 👍 good luck.......................................................... ............................................................................ ..................................

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3 star for now. Wait next bab and good luck...............................................................................................................................................................