Skill Hunter System

Ok so this is Yeng Sensei, ahhhhhhhhhhh English as second language... First time writing novel lmfao Grammar is the worst for me o//3//o Hope you enjoy! Feedback to me so I can improve more! Thanks.

Pretty good start for a first time author. Has a bit of both western and eastern fantasy. I like the system and game elements genre with fantasy. The character development of this book is starting out okay. The background information may be more solid later on as many books has it, such as in the beginning is not as clear as later on.

I love the story!!! I predict since he bybird of High Elf and Dragoon... Maybe he will get a dragon form? Like in the picture of the novel? Argh, can’t wait!

This is a really good writing style that flows well. Plus th Mc has a relatable personality. Jttgggjgdsvhgfffhhjtsbjyrgjjtvjjdhjrghydbj

hello again, the story is getting more serious now, it had improved from the first chapter, i see that your style is evolving, keep improving and this story might get somewhere, my first suggestion will be to not give a lot of skills, a few would be nice, like put a limite to how many skills he could have, like give him 5 skill slots by default, and every 10 or 20 levels, he gets an additional skill slot, this way would be better, and if he wants another skill he would have to erase another, this way the story would be balanced, and don't give him overpowered skills but ones with the potential of becoming one

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2 to 3 chapters a week they said.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢

Those who rate this under 3 is bs.... anyway everything is very very good, just work on the stability of updates o7...........................you’re welcome.

I like it, I like it keep it coming? I like half and half stories 😉 I can see it ranked in the top 30 😊 Aahh that's all I got to write, geez 140 characters next time tho

Earth is just like a speck of dust to the people in the Higher Realm. The Higher Realm is another world, it's known as the land of strong aka Xena Abyss. Dominated by 7 strong race. Yuki Tomohisa, his parent went missing after his birth leaving him with only Grandpa Luo. Grandpa Luo owned a huge dojo as he train Yuki for over 10 years. On Yuki 15th birthday, Grandpa Luo finally reveal Yuki birth and requested him to rescue his own parent in the Higher Realm using his own power! Can he rescue his own parents in the Higher Realm where strength is power? Tag along as we watch Yuki gain his own power on his adventure to his parents. Only 8 chapter and I like story but no up date for 1 year now, so Droped I think! ):

Ok I like everything else but your update rate is **** bro. 5 months and there’s only 8 chapters? I know that this is your second language and all but come on dude. You slacking. I’ve said my piece

all around so far pretty good and i have no qualms about the writing style of the author and i can say that many people would most likely like to read this book and would have fun doing so.

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