Skill System

System? Create your own skill? What is this? It’s so weird. None the less it’s a funny and interesting novel. Recommend it to pass your break. Though that’s all it can do right now, as it doesn’t have many chapters.

About to drop this book. Writing quality was bad and story was unreadable. I couldn't comprehend the story. Not updated for two years already.

Christian, your average **** suddenly found himself in another world. Mc struggles to live in this new world. With Skill system, he strives to live a lazy and carefree life. The gears of fate is slowly turning put him and also those who are dear to him and possibly the whole world. Skill System is good idea but 10 mount and no update Droped ı think! (:

Storry is good, overal i like this! There are system but same stimes quest are troublesame. Thete are beautuful girls too! But 6 mont no update so i gues it droped!

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Grammar is soo bad that the story is unreadable. .................................................................................. .................................................................................. ..................................................................................

The story development is alright, character devolpment leaves much to be desired. The main factor that kills this story for me is the grammar or lack there of. The structuring of conversations, and events are made of pure gibberish most of the time, its clear that the author dosent proof read his work, or is just horribly inexperienced when it comes to the English language. Least he could do is use Grammarly or some other spell check.

It's an interesting idea, but the lack of detail description and the formatting makes it kind of a challenge to read. It's hard to follow what's happening, or form a connection with the events or characters.