Luciel: The Masochistic White Mage

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Hello, your friendly neighborhood Teacup here (The Author). I just wanted to let you know, I’ll try to keep this novel as up to date as I can. Plan on writing at least a hundred or so chapters for the first ‘book’ of this novel. This will probably take a long time for me, as I lack a computer at the moment to write this stuff out, but I will be diligent on my phone! Either way, I hope you enjoy the story, the first few chapters may be a bit of an info dump as its to build the world, I can only say sorry for that if it doesn’t fit your tastes. Thank you for you time, and I hope you find this experience as entertaining as I do.

*Remember: this review is based on the first five chapters.* Constructive Criticism: I see a lack of any of the other transmigrators with exception to the arrival, I hope we see more in the future, if not this will be the only failure I have seen thus in this novel. Positive Feedback: I really like the character builds of the current MC (I say current because if this novel does what I expect, there is not only one MC but four) and his foster father (Who I don't think I'd like as a personal father). I also like how you did the background of this world, most things here have been summoned. I am also happy to report not having seen any WQ errors.;,;. Personal Feedback: I didn't really like how the beginning of chapter one started, felt like a ****** post-apocalyptic novel (Which unless built into a dystopia I don't like) but by the end of the first chapter I was intrigued, and by the end of the second I was hooked, I will definitely come back to this novel a little later once I catch up on others, I'm doing one of these reviews daily but will be catching up on novels when I'm not working on my own.;,;.