Double Souls
Richard Marcos, a simple, honest and hardworking young boy. Living alone in this world after his mother passed away 2 years ago. His father whereabouts is unknown after he divorced Richard’s mother when Richard still 1-year-old. To make a living Richard work at anywhere that can use him as labor in markets, restaurant, construction sites etc. Until one day, his wicked employer sells him to an evil organization that trafficking human organs. Richard’s life faded as one by one of his organs harvested by an evil doctor in surgery table. His consciousness awakens when his transplanted heart starts to throbbing in his new body, the body of a teenage girl named Mary.
What awaits Richard in his ‘second life’ is cruel and twisted fate that brings Richard and Mary against intriguing scheme, brutal and vicious world of darkness that wants to devours them to the bones!
Update plan: uncertain but not dropped
interesting enough for the summary...but don't know if the plot and twist of the story would be eye catching or unique since the update is slow...but well good job for your story Lord Haart...hope you will finish it safisfactorily and become one of my unforgetable story that i will read in the future...keep up!!! ☺
Aw man, 2 chapters/week is too . . . You know what i mean ,.......,......,.......,......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,.......,......,
*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: If you plan on pausing for a time, you should update your readers and let them know why via either your synopsis or reviews... if you dropped the book then you should re-title it to "Dropped" or something else of the like so people don't start reading it unless they are okay with an unfinished story.;,;. Positive feedback: I really enjoyed the five chapters you have written so far and hope you continue writing.;,;. Personal Feedback: I really enjoy this story so far and hope to keep reading, but, if you don't update by 6 months after your most recent chapter, the first of the following month I will drop it.