Rise of the Blood Wolf

In general in TFT i go with a yordle compo, i love dodging everything. I can add sorcerer like Aurelion Sol or Ari and a standalone Yasuo it's pretty cool. Why i write this ? dude the last update was in October 2018 "No guaranteed chapter because I can't guarantee anything" it's been 2 years wtf. Anyway great story, i love the MC design (it's very "look my character is cool" but it works). Persevere, you are on the right path, we will meet again at the top of the glory of our stories

Now I actually enjoy this story and I believe the idea is great but the execution not so much.Problem number 2 you havent updated in 3 weeks.Problem number 3 we know nothing about the world hes in like litterally nothing.Problem 4 the changing of point of veiws is way to confusing you should just stick to one point of view.

there is an idea there but you should rewrite everything, try to make it a little slower, explain better and maybe it will be god, too rushed, no world background, nothing is well explained, too bad

Shitty story i tell you. Grammar is horrible and there is literaly no plot. I doubt you can still continue after a few more chapters. Its already suprising how you even vote youself with powerstones too

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Dog dog see wolf + blood dog dog like dog dog put 5 star review (I king dog shall complete the damned 140 letters requirement fugr its still not completed)