JACK the KING

All 5 stars for me. I put my bloody effort for this and it is definitely the novel I would like to read so why should I deprive myself from valuing my work more. If you have problems with grammatical error, well you should help me instead in correcting them. Contact me here https://discord.gg/6jzhpH so that you can help me correct them. Extremely beneficial for those who wants to read earlier. I am also open for advice's that is related to the novel.....

Love the shounen ai theme, I do hope that it stays that way. . Jack and Noah are the best. I just read chapter 16 and I can't wait for the next chapter due to the cliffhanger ending you left. The novel started to slow down a little and I love it. Best regards in the novel. all in all, I like the idea behind this. The fantasy, comedy, drama, were all good content. I hope you will give me more surprises.

I love the novel as it is, a little bit fast but still its good because i do not really want author to explain every single thing that does will only make me bored. the stability of updates is 1 per day i think. its good but i felt that its too slow because the novel is really good and i want binge read a lot. So i really want to read something when its compiled to the brim. I really hope that the novel will not be dropped before the time i can binge read it. the large world background is something to wait for. even though its already in the 8th chapter. i think the reason is that the author cannot find a proper chapter to insert the explanation about the whole large world. maybe it should be something that we should look out for. its best to write a review after chapter 20 or something about the story line and the characters so i will leave that for later that's all for me. I saw the other reviews so i just basically added mine. I do hope that the Author will not make this story become yaoi or else i am dropping it from my library. i get that this novel is not only a comedy but drama of all kind so i hope that author can properly pull this off. I am not kidding. the author's wild imagination wanting to make us lough because the mc is thinking hilariously and at the same time feel compassionate to cry about the other mc or side mc i don't really know, is making the genre complicated. i don't know if its good or what

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It is a good read , has some good sides to it. Have read a few chapters as I love kingdom build novels. I hope readers can rate it so that it continues .

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I give the low rating isnt because the story is bad but rather cause i annoyed with the characters built. For example when jack jealous with noah gift, hello how old are you jack? You just a reborn/reincarnate basically you older than your look!! So why did you still easily jealous with noah? You're the leader of your team and you're life in there isnt hard as noah!! Duh, im really upset with the characters development in this story. But i still wanna read it till the end cause the background stroy is the genre i loved most. ;)

The only reason I am rating this low is my lack of knowledge of the stability of updates. The writing quality it superb The story development is excellent. We haven’t truly gotten to know the personalities of the character, but we are getting a great outline for how long many chapters there are. Lastly, there isn’t a need for a large world background. But even so, there is some and it’s quite good and appreciated.

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