Journey of the Wand less Mage
Author: avataroftheking
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Death
The end of everything for everyone, but not for Mirai who luckily met the Goddess from her favorite game SIGMA. The poor nerdy girl died from a meaningless hostage taking, yet reincarnated to live life again.
"My life was kinda worthless so lemme give this reincarnation thing a shot!"
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It's been an enjoyable light read so far, though not captivating. The world background seems a bit weak, not because it needs info dump (please spare us from that), but because of the lack of interaction with the other characters. 'Show, don't tell' is good but apart from the quests they provide, her friend and her mother might as well not exist. Lots of mistakes in the first chapters (he/she), though it gets better later. A proof-reader would do wonders I suppose.
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This one seem to be inspired by advent of the archmage, but have the same(kinda) system with night ranger, thought currently the begining have the same patern with advent of the archmage, i hope in the future the story will become more solid and unique, and if there are something to complain that's is update rate, at least make it 3ch or 4ch per week. Sorry for my bad english, and i will change my rating as the story progress. And if possible make summon or contract as a thing.
This story is meets the standards for now. But, the quality of writing could be better. You also need more experience with writing a story. A more detailed character design and plot would be also be good. We should also, get a better understanding of the world in the near future. But, I like this story a lot, so please continue and remember, this is your first story so just try to improve and grow. Good luck, I'll be rooting for you.☺️👍📖