Abandoned by her prince, she felt betrayed. Rage consumed her and swore for revenge, even if it means killing the people she used to love.

Abandoned Princess

So far I like how the story goes - Edward and Elizabeth love each other so much - I wonder what kind of twist is awaiting. 
Thank you for a very entertaining story 😉👍

Hi my precious readers :) Although this is just a hobby, can I ask for your reviews? I mean, can I know if am I doing good? Or is my story sounds corny or a little cliche? I need criticisms since I am thinking of pursuing a writing career by publishing a book on amazon, thanks a lot though :)

I love fantasy and the involvement of fairies and elves and royalties. I know it's kind of cliché since it has been quiet so many years since fairytales have been around but somehow, I am entertained by this story. It's a classical story for me but it's still good. Hope to read it to its end.

I hope I can read it before I graduate which is next week!!! THIS IS SUCK A LOVING STORY!!!! I love how there is the characters that is in the story and how strong the love in this story is.I hope to see Elizabeth giving birth so I hope there is something like that!!!

First of all, the synopsis is pretty much a big spoiler which tell us that the current Crown Prince Edward will betray MC (Elizabeth) later in the story. Considering his character, I would pretty much sure of that. There r many things that I dislike abt this story, i.e:

● Edward is such a non-ML material. I can understand if he is so easily fallen in love with MC just bcoz of her looks n aura. But he is such a weak-minded person that even in his 20 yrs old he's still not ready to bear the burden to rule the kingdom. Not to mention he proclaimed that he loves MC but not refusing low queens in his harem.

● Edward's mother (The Empress) is such an idiot empress. MC clearly felt ominous feelings towards her lady-in-waiting servants but she keeps insisting there's nothing wrong n doesn't care abt MC's intuition. She n Edward knows those girls background but still make them by MC's side?? There is no logic in this.

Overall there is no personalities in each character except Edward the coward. My main point is, for me personally I think the story-plot is totally not my cup of tea. The way Edward n his mother behave really ticked me off, the way MC needs to bow down before other s.l.u.t.s (Stela n other women) due to the pressure of power really makes me mad, not to mention there is no faithfulness here. If Edward really is the ML then I've to say I hate it. He's gonna has his own harem n accepted it. MC also has no decisive character.

I assumed the reason Edward is gonna betray MC later has to do with for his own kingdom's sake n due to women. I'm sure Stela the b***h will ruin their love anyway.

So yea that's my personal opinion only. Feel free to give it a try if u want coz every readers have their own preference. Maybe this is the story for u. Thanks for ur hard work, though Author. Don't let this makes u feel down. ^^