Let the Power of Lightning Strike
NOTE: REASON FOR THIS NOVEL BEING 17 AND ABOVE IS DUE TO GORE CONTENT THROUGHOUT THE STORY AND NSFW SCENES FROM AFTER MID STORY.THERE ARE ALSO REFERENCES TO RAPE.
In a post apocalyptic Earth there remains a land untouched by the disaster where a surviving child of destiny finds time to awaken a power buried within.
The child of lightning shall return to the heavens and discover the truth of life.
Divum is a continent on Earth hidden in a separate space. In this continent there are mutated flora and fauna due to a special energy which is spread throughout. A new born child somehow survives the journey across the Atlantic to escape from a dead world into Divum where he ....does things. Oh yeah, he goes back to said dead world which isn't actually dead.
NOTE: THE CULTIVATION WILL START AFTER BIT INTO THE STORY (say about chapter 20), NOT FROM THE ABSOLUTE BEGINNING!
My first novel. I'm usually a reader but now also a writer. Like a Jet in a Storm.
Release rate slated to be 1/day with at least 1200-2500 words. taking Friday and Saturday off. may write then if I have more readers. may have mass release on Sundays.
I'm a neewbe at writing so 4 stars is all I dare give myself...for now. But you shall all tremble before the might of Jetstorm-sama before long. I believe my writing quality to be quite readable. But can't get the stability yet so...yeah. I only wrote 3 chaps not much development above the basics. I haven't introduced the world properly because its the Earth 70% water and 30% land. Though its post apocalypse so should be changes. Which will be introduced when Adam leaves the island. For character design I can't say I'm the best at it but I think I'll work. Basically I'm writing a cultivation novel in a post apocalyptic theme on Earth. I need helpful comments. Any suggestions given should be feasible and in line with the story.
Author again. Now I have finally stabilized my schedule so releases rate should be stable. I have added some "depth" to the characters and world background. The story also has a fixed route to follow which helps with the story development. As such I can finally place 5 stars to my own novel with pride! Tell me guys, what is the reason I have no followers? TELL ME NOW!!!
Awesome work, Jetstorm! Love it so far! Keep it up! This story has a fast paced beginning. You won't be disappointed. The characters are also very interesting and entertaining. I would recommend skipping the info dump at the beginning of the story, though. It's unnecessary.
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