Legacy (Naruto fanfiction)by cr4zypt

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Some one has already done this dummy. .............................................................................................................................................

The story is completely illogical. Kissing each other at the age of eight, expelling Hinata from the clan, discovering Inbu hiding and killing Junin, infiltrating the clan's headquarters and stealing techniques. There are many illogical things.

Very good story... ...................................................................................................................................................................................

Yep another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. another one. And another one.

man story is best but too many plot holes 1. why rin died (in origionals madara killed her to manipulate obito thus giving him and kakashi mangenkyo 2, you said byakugan came from sharingan wtf what about otsuki clan etc etc

Such an amazing fanfiction i’ve read. I just wanna keep reading this forever. too goooooooooooooood. Just the storyline makes me love it.

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it was an interesting and good story. could have used a few more jokes. Spoiler: i would have written in the description / summary that Naruto is a descendent of Madara and Hashirama. only to make more people interested

Well it has a few mistakes in spellings but I am overlooking it because of the story itself as it makes more sense than others This is executed Perfectly without any mistakes

one of the best, if not the best Naruto fan fiction I have ever read. the story progressed fluidly, character developed so much better than the original. the ending was so much better than the Canon as well. if this was the story for canon (anime and manga), it would have topped my lists.

One of the few fanfictions that achieve a near perfect balance between creating your own twist to the overall narrative and remaining true to what Naruto ultimately is.

the only thing I didn't like, was that it ended, it was perfect......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

perfect ending, perfect journey, arguably better than the original. The perfect balance between OPness and actually intelligent, not some power hungry fool