Cross Worlds: The Tale of Two Boys who swapped worlds

The writing is great and creative. A chapter is long and describe things rather descriptively. But, me here as a person with lack of focus, I think that 40 page chapter could easily tire the readers and became boring if you couldn't engage the readers into reading your novel. Nonetheless, keep improving, you write well.

Woo! It's like an Arata Katagiri situation but better! Just like two Aratas switching places, the protagonists Yuri Tachibana and Tachibana Yuri switch. Furthermore, we get a sci-fi world instead of a normal fantasy world, which is quite unique. The two Yuris have polar opposite personalities, which lead to wild situations on both worlds. While the story has eleven chapters when I wrote this, we can see a lot of potential with the uniqueness of the worlds. In addition, the grammar and writing style is pretty good. While there are some errors, it doesn't deviate from the reading. Definitely recommended for Japanese LN lovers with a different spin from the standard isekai. >3</

I'm simply overjoyed to find a Japanese or anime/manga-ish setting as I don't see them a lot in this portal. I don't usually read fantasy novels but if mixed with the said setting and isekai genre, I got to like this. The description and elaboration of the world is great and the characters are well-written and described. I've seen and read the kind of story elsewhere but it never gets old and new concepts are being established. But there are some things that did not sit well, like the concept where Sekai terms are generally Japanese terms even though MC ought to be able to understand it since he himself is Japanese. With all that said, Cross Worlds is a great story and I'll be sure to continue reading the novel. Keep up the good work! :)

Really great writing! I like how they swapped but the two worlds are affected by one another. I’d like a ring that can store things too! The characters personality shine quite well, and the descriptions are good. The settings are pretty easy to follow, and there’s some nice comedy in here too. This is a nice spin on the other world theme. The only suggestion I have is to make the chapters shorter. They’re easier to digest while on a mobile device, and it allows us to remember parts we like so we can comment. Also, it’ll allow you to “update more often,” so that might reduce the upload frequently stress of writers.

Readability and sentence variety is high. The author does not overuse passive voice. The only gripe I have would be that he has a slight tendency to overuse words- such as was. Still the plot is progressing as the synopsis promised and definitely worth a read for anyone interested in body swapping etc.

Hi, author sorry I reviewed your book late, So here is my review first the writing techniques I gave you 5 cause I don't have grammar issues 😆😆😆 Second, the updates gave you 5 for I understand you write whenever you have time. Third, the plot of the story is wow and I like it so it's a 5 Fourth and fifth, two boys from a different world swapped (prince and ordinary guy) is good for me and the background is well explained so all in all I rated you 5stars. Keep up author 😊😊😊

This story is amazing. Each and everything is detailed. I liked the way you designed the plots, this is a unique story.keep up the work Author. Good job. Will be waiting for further chapters😇 My best regards to you😄

First of all wanna say, this book is awesome. Totally different from the ones I have read. The plot and character development is amazing. The world background is also good.. 5 stars for the book. Totally recommend it if you are up for a new savvy kind of novel.

Great plot! I love it. great characters great world background. story development is good explaining the concept of the two worlds perfectly. I totally recommend this story. Great work author.

First of all, story's well written. Second, plot is awesome. Third, there's comedy and seriousness. Fourth, c'mon it's a novel that mentions a parallel world. What more do u need? Author, I really like this book. Even though it is just seven ch, they were enough to keep me hooked. You've got urself another reader

The characters are unique, the world background is explained clearly. The story is a mix of comedy with a tinge of seriousness. I'm looking forward to the plot and how the two Yuri's deal with their switch. Overall, it's an interesting novel for people looking for interesting situations. :)

Amazing story. A full pack of Action, Magic and Humour. The parallel world concept has been explained perfectly. First I was like the MC has to die and then swap worlds-like reincarnation but what I read was even better. Please upload the next chapter... Can't wait to read

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This is an amazing story! The switched between a Prince and a normal guy into a different world is brilliantly woven. Every chapter is packed with entertainment, magical activity and exciting adventure awaits the reader. The author has a wild and wide imagination, he can make you believe magic and parallel universe. So real, feels like you enter it yourself. I like Tachibana best, the fake Prince! When he's back to earth his life will never be the same again. Am looking forward to Prince Yuri's adventures on earth. Anyways...writing quality is good. Story development is fantastic! Character design is superb, they are relatable and adorable. I can recommend this novel to anyone who loves adventure! Good job Author! Keep it up.