RWBY: The Phantom of Remnant

So far i love your story abd how it is progressing and how you devilping the character. I like how your going to give him memories of alternate versions of himself from different animes

It could be better, early on there's unique ideas, but this is that typical, I'm op and a massive chad type story, there are various oc's which have balanced semblances and the like, and like most op rwby fan fics, the mc has 2 semblances at the level of 3.5 dnd in versatility. Long story short, it's the standard op harem novel that gets stale real~ fast. Whilst there's interesting ideas, updates are slow, the content is lackluster and filled with clichés and common tropes, and the general content is similar to various anime and books that it's boring to read. I wanted to drop this book the moment I saw naruto in the first few chapters, thinking it was going to be exactly the same as 5 other fanfictions, but honestly it was an even bigger let down than if it was. The author uses a anime system for his semblance, which 3 star rating for that alone, but then they combine a harem system..... haaa, yeah tbh it's a slog and boring to read. Grammar is good, but the content for a monthly updating story is a complete let down tldr: Novel's boring, slow updates for lackluster content. Some originality, but to little to keep the content feeling fresh. If you like trashy op-mc harem novels then welcome, otherwise avoid it

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I know where this is going, so pick this up & have a read you will not be disappointed. A lot of badasses to come, so sit back & enjoy the ride.

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This is better than the rest of all the RWBY fanfiction I have read.Please give us more. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This is how you do a RWBY FANFICTION ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

The story is great and i love how it just flows, i told many before but myself who made RWBY novels belive that everyone who makes a RWBY novel is great the idea is awesome, so to me, it’s better then my own, also updates more then me 😅, keep up the great work.

Start to finish didn't even take a day. Just kept reading so to you author I beg of you to not drop this story as I'm obsessed with your story. Nothing bad can be said about this story. All that read this I bid you to support the author.

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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work

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excellent work plz keep it up I ended up reading the whole thing in only 2 days. since I couldn't put it down. I look forward to more chaps and how far you're going with this. excellent workmanship. Believe it!!

Really love the story. The mc isn’t too op nor is he a pu@@y and the development is really great. Try it, you won’t regret it- (I hope you don’t cause it emerald is good).