misleading title. .. 30 chapter and still no sign of marvel world..
3 days ago
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Luizz_Ricardo
I'm going to give it 5 stars because I love Naruto and I think your writing is very good, the grammar has no flaws, the problem with the fanfic is its repetition of dialogues and thoughts, the rhythm is very slow and boring, this story arc where Naruto goes to cities and towns to heal people is very boring.
misleading title. .. 30 chapter and still no sign of marvel world..
I'm going to give it 5 stars because I love Naruto and I think your writing is very good, the grammar has no flaws, the problem with the fanfic is its repetition of dialogues and thoughts, the rhythm is very slow and boring, this story arc where Naruto goes to cities and towns to heal people is very boring.