DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]

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You’re off to a pretty good start just really hope you don’t end up doing the whole harem route as that will always ruin a good story. Anyways thank you for your story and keep up the great work!

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Great grammar and spelling so far (which compared to 99% of the novels on this godforsaken app is amazing) Huge potential for the plot so far and no real qualms with any of the character interactions so far Great at explaining the system and abilities What can I say? This novel is pretty awesome! ✌🏼

Yeah great start and system choice as it will be fun to see where it goes also hope this doesn't end up like most dbz stories that never get done or fast enough releases harem is ok but maybe only up to 3 so as to not side track much of the story but still have him making many next gen sayians on earth

It’s a good pass time Fanfic until chapter 50s. After that, it’s basically a cultivation novel one of the chinese wuxia thing. Clans and stuff you know.. So read it until chapter 53 and you can drop it.

IF AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I WOULD REQUEST HIM TO CONTINUE PLEASE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I mean its decent but it Got to the point where i was reading this story just to laugh since its not the best but its still decent and i like long stories

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I simply love it, sorry about that spammer who made 4 accounts just to down your reviews 4 times. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I really love this fanfic. By far one of the best DragonBall fan fictions on the Web novel Web site. This novel has great pace, great plot, great main character and original characters, and wonderful grammar. Keep it up author.

I love this Fan-Fic and normally it has a good update speed but now after a long time Webnovel.com F*cks up and I can't read the latest chapter. (╬▔皿▔)╯

The english and grammar is poor, which intern makes the story feel choppy and hard to read. Obviously the stories updates are none or few and far between. But I will say that you do well with the characters and the world they live in.

The system is stupid as hell. Dont like the mc personality. Mc got too much system point at the start of the story. Mc is in trouble let buy a new technique and kill the bad guy kinda ****. And the fights are boring as hell. Really hoped it would be good but its not for my liking.