HSDXD X NANATSU (DROP)
Author: Sekz318
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Warning, this story is Dropped.
If you still want to continue reading, keep in mind that this story contains a lot of cliche scenes, the vast majority simply for the author's enjoyment, as well as spelling errors that would make a native English speaker cry blood, and several plot holes.
you are warned.
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I havs to say that the topic you choosed for your novel is fantastic and I hope for you to add more dark powers to Mc and make him cold type as shameless Mc, idiot Mc , etc are too common but cold is not used my time as it is hard to do so.And also let Mc wearing Estorrasa clothes and gauntlets. Try releasing everyday and once in two days and also write long chapters. Giving you 5 stars just for your idea so keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed reading this book 📖 and can’t wait for more chapters to be posted. I would recommend to all reader that like Nanatsu no taizai (Seven Deadly Sins).
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Pacing is too slow at the moment. Nothing really excites me even when I am a few chapters in. And the way u navigate the story is not fluid. Grammer and vocab wise is also quite bad. Ur phrasing of words need a lot of development and use thesauraus to help improve ur vocab. Once this story gets better, I will remove this review and give u a new 1.
Worst novel ever MC is stupid and idiot as **** . I mean yeah when you woke up in dxd world where a single low class demon can **** you up . You go out and do experiments on magic so the ****ers know about your existence . I mean what happens to these mc 's do they get mind raped or something when born. And I don't know what is funny about making a character who if taken in realistic form will die the moments he was born .
The stories not bad. I want more. The stories not bad. I want more. The stories not bad. I want more. The stories not bad. I want more.The stories not bad. I want more.The stories not bad. I want more.
IS THE AUTHOR STILL THERE? I HOPE YOU WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND IT IS REALLY A GOOD ONE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥
Became pretty lame pretty fast, dont really understand what other people see in this fanfic. Lots of wrong words used while writing, sometimes makes sentences hard to understand/lose its meaning. Character building not to my personal liking, just seems like a dull MC.
Great idea I wish the author could edit it because I'm barely following what's happening, otherwise it's got the potential to be a good story
Review at chapter 10 The grammar is thrown away. You have to read some paragraphs 5 times before understanding what it is conveying. But he's re-editing, I think. The updates seem stable (1chapter per week I think). The story is slow at the beginning but it's not really a "bother" (It took 5 chapters for him to be born). After that it's timeskip on timeskip, and it's kinda confusing. But the biggest let down is the amount of stupidity MC has done in 10 chapters (even if it's somehow explained). At the 10th chapter end, I don't know anymore if he's a alpha male or a beta. He's made to become friend with Issei (perso I hate Issei as much as Rias) because according to the almighty author it'll help him shape his attitude. I don't understand how befriending a child would change an ***** personality. And finally, he got the power to create sacred gear (or treasure) but he didn't use it so far. If I learned one thing from HS DXD it's that sacred gear are almighty. There's 4 named OC so far: MC, his parents and Sera-tan maid. We don't know anything about them. Zero character development. They could have been side characters a, b and c and it wouldn't have changed anything. Anyway it's the beginning it can become better. For the world, it's the world of DXD even if we haven't seen much of it yet.
The Story is not bad per se but ...... Grammer is not so good i mean the fucking Basic Stuff everybody in the WHOLE FUCKING WORLD even Children now how to use HE/SHE/IT
The story is good overall. But the fact that the author can't properly use He/She/I/You (Basic Stuff), is annoying as you read through....................................................................................................................................................................................(I hate 140 words restriction!!!!)
Your story development is seriously too slow. You are starting out as a kid, thats a bad idea. And so far, zero action whatsover. I thought I will get to see some fighting few chapters in but no. Also, ur chapters are too short. Like legit too short.
shameless review coming........................ . ................................................................................................................................................