A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer

I'm just advertising my own story! Read if you want! Writing Quality: English isn't my national language, so I am self-conscious of mistakes I unconsciously made. Stability of Updating: I write when I am in the mood and have a free time, so it's so-so. Story Development: I write whatever pops up in my mind without straying far from official materials, so I do not have real problem with this, I think. Character Design: Other than my Original Main Character, everyone else is the characters from official materials. World Background: Again, it follows official materials.

I'm giving a FULL 5 STAR REVIEW on this novel. Why? Because OP MC of course! Also harem! Not only those, it has a nice plot, and MC is not a D1ck, or thinking with his D1ck, definitely not that kind of MC. Just read it already, its really worth your time!

This novel is very well written. First of,the grammar is excellent which is definitely a huge plus. The story is well written. Initially the story seems like the MC is going to turn out into some scum but he doesn't. He is OP but in a good way that doesn't ruin the story. The MC is a contrast to Hajime who is just another Japanese beta male cuck MC. The MC takes what he wants and doesn't help anyone without purpose. All in all,a good book with room to improve. Keep up the good work.

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Utter Bullshi_t , this is what I call this story , don't waste your time guys this novel isn't worth , many will say that I only read only 1 chapter and concluded that but no I read many and this is my opinion

I mean the fact that anime and novels really have something to do with copas or your god idea from the action to the gore genre, and another fact here that the bullies are still reading the new chapter or not so that proves that their words are nonsense which is severe. and salute the writers who want to spend a business that I think is a good novel, although not the best

Well I think the MC is a little to OP and the wishes could have a better Connection to the arifureta System kinda destroys the worth of leveling up and visiting the Geat dungeons. Also MC is way to low-style for all his Power. Even so you shouldn't drop this fanfic so fast. The author did a great job in character details and the story is still quite interesting. It's a rare fanfiction and also author's first fanfic so give it a chance. All in all a fanfic thats worth reading. //keep it up author ;)

If you want help writing i could help its nice seing new anime having a fn fic already cheer up!!!(oﾟ▽ﾟ)o and because i need more words im going yo put this ok?

Read it if you are ok with insta overpower MC's. Out of 52 chapter are 6 *****/sex chapters. The writing itself is great and i cant find any or many Grammitcal errors. Its Harem and right now the MC has two chicks as his bedwarmer. And now to the problem i have with the story so far. Which is the OP'nes of the MC, the MC says himself that he could kill the strongest entity of this world in chapter 1~10 and repeats that with a comparison of the strongest entity beeing a pebble on the sidewalk and he beeing able t9o just "kick" him away if he annoys him. With comparisons like that there is No interist to follow the story further. No one can beat the MC -> No hardships only smooth sailing. ( like One Punch Man but without Comedy? ) Right now this is more of an *slice of life of a dude running around in a novel/manga/animeworld. Whoever reads this, have a nice day, give this novel a try and have a nice cup of tea.

...................................................................................................................................................................................................Nice novel I only hope you don't drop iz like some other authors .

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Good work

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So I love arifueta and so far I love this. I just hope it doesn't become one guy and a hundred girls. Stop at a decent number please. Seriously too many girls kills a good story.