I like the story so far mc isn't too crazy or soft for now. But please don't make him one of those who share all their powers from the system with everyone even people mc knew only for some time. It is fine to share maybe with his close ones like wives. Finally, make it haram, there are just too many beauties in against the gods, also I want Yun Che to be cuckolded.
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5 years ago
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5 years ago
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EyeOfSauron
I swing my sword and decapitate one, I run away from a wolf pack with deep energy running around being an ordinary human, I welcome a stranger into my house with my sense of premonition that everything will be fine, letting him play with my children, I teach haki to someone from another world, I create confusing theories of a yin yang nucleus, I climb a random tree and see a city, there are no other trees hindering my vision ... it's basically a poorly told story, talking about the that just happened ... weak writing, generic idea.
5 years ago
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Pen_God
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5 years ago
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6 years ago
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6 years ago
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EmbarrassedEdge
I like it. The MC seems fine, the update rate is good.
I'm not sure about how fast or slow the story is progressing since i've never read original ATG.
The system isn't OP, no bloodline buying bullcrap.
6 years ago
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matja1
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I like the story so far mc isn't too crazy or soft for now. But please don't make him one of those who share all their powers from the system with everyone even people mc knew only for some time. It is fine to share maybe with his close ones like wives. Finally, make it haram, there are just too many beauties in against the gods, also I want Yun Che to be cuckolded.
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I like it. The MC seems fine, the update rate is good. I'm not sure about how fast or slow the story is progressing since i've never read original ATG. The system isn't OP, no bloodline buying bullcrap.
I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------