An accidental romance
After her grandmother's death Kate Jones went to live with her parents.
She expected that her mother and father would love her but all her expectations had been shattered. Her parents never cared about her and often compared her with her older sister Renesmee.
As she grew up she learned that her grandmother left all her inheritance for her. She realised that her parents took her back with them not because they loved her, But because of the inheritance her grandmother left for her. But she decided that she would be a good daughter. She did everything her parents said. But even after that she never saw love in their eyes for her.
When she turned 18 they got her engaged with Marcelo Lawrence, they didn't even asked her if she wanted to marry him or not.
She couldn't even completed her graduation and they forced her to marry him. So the young Kate had to marry Marcelo.
But her suffering didn't ended their, she was often mistreated by her in-laws and her husband never loved her.
On her 20th birthday he tried to kill her, she somehow saved herself and ran from there.
She decided not to go back to her abusive husband and to her parents because she knew they would never going to believe her.
She changed her name to "Angel" and went to live in D city.
After running from her abusive husband, Angel decided to work in a company, which provided temperary employees . She changed her original name and without any appropriate qualification , she worked as an assistant in a salon. She was often mistreated by her employer and other staff but she hang in there, untill one day when she was returning home from work, she saw 5 men beating a single guy. She decided to ignore but couldn't because she remembered when her husband tried to kill her noone came for her rescue not even god. So she decided to help him.
she some how maneged to run from there, and she rang police siren on her phone, she placed her phone in a tin box so that it became loud . After that those guys ran. she admitted the guy in the hospital.
Two weeks later when she was returning home from work, she saw a biker was going to hit the guy, who was crossing the road in front of her she pushed the guy and instead of him she got hit.
she didn't know that helping a random guy could change her life completely, one day she was a temporary employee now she was girlfriend of a superstar......
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For the readers - the story might seem boring and obvious in start but if you could ignore, some grammatical errors I do have a beautiful story to share.
And please share your views on my work, your reviews and comments can help me a lot, this is my first novel and I really want to improve my writing.
It fun to read this novel but I hope the update will be consistent & regularly...can't wait to read more...I have high hope for this novel..keep fighting,author....😘😘😘🎈🎈
Hi. I was invited to read this novel and read it up to chapter 10, so my review is about what I’ve read so far. I think the author has a very complex story here, full of plot twists and support characters. It’s not a simple romance (and the romantic bit is not simple, too!): it has a mystery aura that seems to grow as the chapters go. I’d like to advice the author to rewrite her synopsis in a way the events are not disclosed in the way they are now. It might confuse your new readers. The first chapters are a bit in a rush as the events unfold quickly and superficially; anyway you can symphatize with the lovely Angel, as many characters do, by the way. Somewhere later, a new plot twist will take Angel to (oh, I can’t tell, it’d be spoiler). But you get it. It’s not a story to be bored at. I believe you, as me, will not discover so quick which is the guy that will get her heart (is it a spoiler?). We all should stay to find out.
I actually know someone who went through this similar situation... but she didn't get out of it. So the feels is real. :( Thankfully, Angel was able to save herself. Now she'a struggling to make ends meet but she seems to be doing fine? (Idon't think I spoiled anything there so no spoiler tag. Lol) Still, there's a thread that seems to be just out of the reader's reach and it is this sort of mystery that interests me. Glad I found this novel. It's on my wall now. Keep it up, author, and good luck to you!
I met first such smooth writing style, and the its brings a sense a flow in the reader which is the most admirable thing, and I also felt a sense belonging too. I like it I must say. Writers learn with the time Goodluck author
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This the first novel I had studied in this app. I like the plot but it has too much mystery. I still couldn't decide who the main lead is. But it is still readable . Keep up the good work.
This is the second novel I am reading on this app I like how simple the story is in the start and how complicated it has been become in just seven chapters. I think the viewers should give this story a chance this is refreshing and interesting.....
This is the first novel I read in Web novel my friends suggested it and I quite like the plot it is interesting I am looking forward to see who is the male protagonist.
I like the story building so far. characters are too suspicious and it has some history too that increases your curiosity. To know more about the story you read further but all you got is another mystery at some point you realise that you got the main lead but the next moment you got someone else.
I have read chapters its just that something similar happened with my friend she married to a wrong guy and he used to beat her every day in the end she ran away when I read the story I just remembered my friend I think this story is worth giving a chance
I think the author is a new writer because the content is to low and the chapter is small there are not any conversation in it it's just that story is building well I will try to read some chapters to see how the story took progress and I think main characters background should be more clear but it's just one chapter so I will see if I like the progress of the story
I would have preferred character development for the female protagonist. I've only read 41 chapters, so I'm not sure what to think.But, in any way, I'm having a great time reading this novel.
There is a story to tell. I like how the events are progressing. Keep it up. For the writing quality, some minor concerns about the usage of apostrophe, comma and period. This is for the early chapter though. So I believe author will gain more reader if they can go back in these early chapters to be edited. Overall, it is a good read. Nice book title btw. Please keep writing. :)
Hey Author! This is a good plot and the synopsis itself is sorta engaging, however, I sincerely hope that the female lead genuinely becomes strong instead of relying on tin cans and superstar husbands.😂 The grammar is okay. And so is the update stability. Keep up the good work, author!
Stating the title first it's pretty good enough to catch attention. Moving onto the plotline it's very rushed and the author has neglected the MCs emotions badly, at least in initial chapters. Reader is unable to dive into the storyline completely thus the novella is reduced to just storytelling. I hope author works on it for better along with the world building which I felt was a bit ambiguous. Now quoting the good points grammar usage is pretty fine, though a little practice is needed. That's because author maybe is non-English and it happens to most here. The storyline is typical cliché but I believe author will pull out something unique out of it. As I can predict, it's a good work to read. ❤