Bro use the proper fucking term for chess like queen knight rook bishop pawn not this fucking nonsense of jumper or tower you sound like a fucking 5 year who doesn't know the **** chess suck a fucking turn off on a other wise good fic
6 years ago
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Ryan_Nguyen_6225
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6 years ago
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AyushKumar199855
Hi, author the story is very good but I think you need a proof reader and an editor for it as I have seen many mistakes. If you need it contact me by my e mail at ayushkumar199855@gmail.com.
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6 years ago
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Thomas_Ingosi
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4 years ago
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MannyTheManticore
the story over all is okay it's just not only is the grammar actually giving me a headache and some of the words used should be replaced with words that makes sense in the context in certain sentences it's like you typed it with autocorrect turned on and everybody knows how that thing does not work
Bro use the proper fucking term for chess like queen knight rook bishop pawn not this fucking nonsense of jumper or tower you sound like a fucking 5 year who doesn't know the **** chess suck a fucking turn off on a other wise good fic
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Hi, author the story is very good but I think you need a proof reader and an editor for it as I have seen many mistakes. If you need it contact me by my e mail at ayushkumar199855@gmail.com.
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Use our affordable services to write articles. The plot is overly disorganized. Next time please contact us if there is a need to combine an article into a story or essay
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the story over all is okay it's just not only is the grammar actually giving me a headache and some of the words used should be replaced with words that makes sense in the context in certain sentences it's like you typed it with autocorrect turned on and everybody knows how that thing does not work
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