The cutest omniversal shopkeeper.
Author: Wrathos
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This is a story about a transmigrator that ,gets a omniversal shop as one of his wishes. He Unfortunately got greedy in his wishes so he is transformed to look like a kirby. At least he kept his wishes, but how will people take him seriously as a businessman.
I do not own Kirby,Harry Potter, Naruto,World of Warcraft,The avatar the last airbender,Legend of korra, Starwars,Overlord, Dead by daylight, My hero academia,konosuba, Cuthulu mythos, and any other stories,characters, and worlds that my MC visits. They all belong to their respective owners, I do not gain any monetary value from making said story. I do this to better my writing, Express my thoughts and opinions on the original works.
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Good concept about OP(as if) mc with a store, bad execution of story. MC being kirby the shopkeeper, it really unique but very few readers interested to see that. Mostly readers read some OP human shopkeeper, that MC gain interest many readers. World building so confusing and random specially on early chapters. 1st world naruto world, MC's shop always hop in timeline and different places on naruto world with no indication for the readers that the shop teleported. MC and characters dialogue and interaction so confusing specially on which person is talking on dialogue. MC interaction also suck like a wuss japanese anime generated MC. I tell you he doesn't own the shop even the God said that he fulfill his wish, the shop is sentient and only listen few times on MC. He doesn't even has full control of the shop which the shop always follow the rules that God (who's MC met and fulfilled his with). So basically MC is a kirby with no control and little voice in the shop. Hes only role is being a shop keeper not the owner. So he's a seller or something employed by God to interact with the customer.
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I like the idea a lot but the execution is done poorly the story is sadly badly writen and the world background isn't even a a close to good choice.
I LOVED THIS FANFIC, KIRBY, MAGIC SHOP CUTENESS, YEEEEEESSSSSSS, you my friend are really a creative one, hard to find those, please don't drop it you have my support!.
The title should be changed to the masochistic Kirby the way he just does whatever the shop says taking a loss on almost every deal. Not to mention that he willingly became a slave to another diety. Said he doesn't deal with 'evil' but deals with every major villain from each universe he visits. A major contradiction in every chapter
the story was really good mc is op but not too much, the story is really well written and it developed quite well, i really liked the character because i love kirby and he is one of my favorite characters. the background of the world is quite unique and I recommend reading this beautiful story pity it does not continue
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this is great and pretty enjoyable, but what sold me the most was the fact that the main character look like kirby, just imagining an adorable pink ball in some world with a high death rate opening a shop amuses me.
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Very unique and funny spin on the typical omniverse traveling genre.................................................................................
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