I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

I read until 34. The writing quality is understandable but still can be improved. The story idea is not bad, the plot moves fast given the short chapters. I leave it because of the unpleasant feelings I got from reading forced situations (With a relevant character), and a secondary / villain having *** scenes with "innocent" pretty girls. Just bullshit. The MC lacks character, he looks like a rag doll. The relationships between the characters could be improved so as not to seem empty, obvious and fucking forced. There is nothing that attracts me to continue reading, and that I came for the factor of 'Kingdom Building', and the Harem, thinking that the MC was going to break it. I am disappointed, and I hope the author supports the review and does not delete it. Let everyone know what they can find, the bad taste in my mouth has saved me too many times. (Spoiler?) In a forced scene, I think it would be nice to say that there is NTR (MC). Although it does not get to be sexual. Damn commitments.

This story is decent but has a lot of potentials. I would recommend for you to use Grammarly and read back over it, or get an editor. .............................................................................................................................................

I see the developing story, mattfuncool! Regardless of the length of the chapters, it is more important to see that the story is moving. Keep writing!

Amazing story, character background and it's eadly struggle.. take ny 5 stars author i'll save this novel and hope that you will upload the chapters a bit faster

I honestly love this story so much! I don't really have anything bad to say. I love the word you've created, it's very interesting! Honestly can't wait to read more. Keep it up!

This story is really nice. Good character descriptions and attention to detail. The world you've created is very interesting. I can't wait to read more and I wish you the best of luck!

The story has a lot of potential, is well-paced, and flows smoothly. The MC is interesting and well-thought-out There are some typos and grammatical errors but with an editor, those can be easily resolved.

I came here for Kingdom building/Necromancer, Harem and good lemon. But all i got was a boring plot with random people lemon. Mc: I really like the idea but it's really boring, the guy gots so much power but he verly even uses it. I keep forgetting he's a necromancer, instead he feels more like one of those snake like guy's that's always plotting against the mc.(Btw i stopped at chapter 48) Lemon: really disappointed in the lemon I doubt anyone looking for lemon, wants to see random people doing instead of the mc.( I don't really count foreplay that's really weak to me). Harem: The harem is ok mc respects them and they seem to really care for him and respect him. i did read a review that there is NTR just putting that out there for anyone that wants to know.

All and all good story updating is a little slow but not every can be perfect and it's to and reasonable time so I approve of this story.👍👍

I like it it's got good characters and a well-developed plot with a lot of action. I can not wait to see what happens next to Richard. I hope the author gets lots of love for this work.

I like this book, the idea is interesting and has enough potential to create a long novel. The characters have depth but that could be worked on further. Also, some punctuation is lacking so maybe pay some more attention to that. Overall good work and keep it up! :)

This story is good, and I like it. The author has done a great job, as I know writing is hard. If the author keep improving, then this story will be a great one

Writing needs editting and proof reading Updates is stable Story development - vry chapter moves the story. Its an esikai reincarnated in a world of magic and adventure Character design and world background progress as the story goes :)

4.6/5 The grammar could definitely use improvement, but I can see where the author is going with the story. It's a pretty interesting story. No spoilers here, but If you can look past some grammar issues, I invite everyone to check this novel out!