Yang Lan a former super mercenary has come to the big city to be a tycoon.
With him will join him his brothers.
Accompany him on his journey!
AN: I'm a newbie author. Bad writing, bad grammar, bad everything. I hope I can improve doing this.
JustPassing123
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The story has potential. I personally have never read anything with a similar setting so I find it fresh. The writing quality needs some work but as the author is new and doesn't seem to have much experience that is to be expected. I would encourage readers to look past the grammatical errors and read the story without a critical mindset.
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The novel isnt that bad, it needs more updates thats for sure and for the rest, jusst a bit of improvement and the novel will be very good. Anyone who sees this review, try to read the novel
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Its a good story you guys should read it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]