I Reincarnated As A System?!
Author: ThisDaoist
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Jason Chard was a successful game developer, till his attempt at being heroic had him lose his short life.
Due to a mix up in the reincarnation process, Jason found himself stuck in a system just like the games he developed! Doomed to a boring life of handing out quests and dealing with the players worries, Jason vows to himself that he must regain his body and go back home, even if the entire universe turns against him!!
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Author here, so let me just give a review from my side. I plan for this to be quite a long series, maybe Around 1000 chapters. Now it may be called, I reincarnated as a system, but the main focus would be on bloodlines and inheritance. That's what the plot would focus on. I reincarnated as a system would view my world from two perspectives, we have two main characters. Each one with a similar similar heroic personality, but very different. I hope you all won't hate Mo Zuo, he is young now, but I promise he will mature into an epic main character! Jason is made to be slightly bipolar so understand if he acts one way here, one way there.
You definitely feel as if you are the mc. It has a good foundation from the start. Needs a few minor tweaks, but this does not take away from the story or flow at all. Has a really good start and for me a unique outlook. Keep up the good work author!
Based on the synopsis story looks interesting enough. Oly 13 chapters are out as of this review, judge the book after reading more than 10 chapters
Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game. The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!
The plot isn't the first of its kind but it is still a worthy read as it has a unique plot setting that differs it from your usual martial arts novel. Overall, this is a good choice for those who love to read RPG and Martial Arts.
Unique and different. A person being reincarnated as a system. Just a few chapters but I am already hooked. On top of that, the writing was superb. Each chapter was written well. Everything was perfect. Author, keep up the good work!
The story is great - aside from the pure amount of content and the frequency of updates, there is the amazing world-building - the magic system, stats and the quests. The idea to make the MC always be accompanied by someone is a really smart idea especially when it comes to the comedic aspects of a story. I like the speed at which the story progresses, the MC gets new spells and increases their stats quickly, but that is to be expected at low levels. My only suggestion is that the combat scenes tend to be pretty short - I understand this may not be a combat-centric series but I think they dealt with the boar a bit too quickly for example. Overall great series with an interesting setting that is rewarding to read thanks to the character progression.
Amazing !!!! We all have read stories about the MC having a system by have you read one where the MC is the system? I THINK NOT!!! This is an amazing story filled with humor and a sense of satisfaction that you can only get from a great novel. So READ THIS AMAZING NOVEL!!!
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