It feels good to get a second chance by reincarnation in another world. But when the world you go to has a way a of getting stronger by being more perverted, that is when shit hits the fan. Weak to Strong OC. Small Harem (It's DXD, what did you expect?). Canon will start in later chapters. M for language and maybe lemons. Will follow general storyline of DXD, with changes.
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I am the same author from Fanfiction.net so I am not stealing another's story. When I post chapter 4, I will announce it on that chapter.
Its good they said. You should try it they said. Why are you still reading my review they said. You should just start reading they said. And now i need to fill more than 140 character they said. Well it got long chapter. Good grammar even tho there are also some error. Interesting mc. Good story and character development. Its just the though are using the same conotation as conversation so it makes reader confuse about which is his inner dialogue and which is a conversation You should use (') like 'this' for inner dialogue and (") like "this" for conversation.
This is pretty good! Though you will have to be careful about how you decide to go forth and not make it a stupid story. It is a little refreshing as you didn't do the whole "you get x amount of wishes" or a system. Beyond that, I can see this story going in a good direction. I hope to see more updates soon.
It's well written, engaging and had large chapters. Each chapter is about the size of 10 on this site. The story is a bit slow paced and highly detailed. All in all its a good read, but would have been better if it didn't appear to have been dropped.
Great fic hard to come by personally love Gilgamesh cross modred ancestor plz keep up the good work I love how this is working out so yeah overall amizing fanfic
Great start for the story maybe 1 of the best mix of dxd and fate that I have ever seen and the story is getting very well executed please keep up with the good work
Bro u had no right to end the series, u had the all u had written the mc with op potential but did it in away that he will develop to fast for the story, u made him relatable , his character is consistent and u understand that more harem members makes it harder to write characters 10/10 . What u have hear is something I can't say about most of the other webnovels , it's only the good leave while the bad stay
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i cannot give 5 star because i do not know this novel describe about what?? so i hope you improve more about your novel. i will support your creation.