Douluo Dalu:Breaking Clan

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Hi i am just translating this by correcting some mistakes, and it's actually a pretty good Douluo Dalu fanfic. If you want get access to advanced chapters you can join Patreon

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Yeah it is good but still he is too weak and novel update stability is not good and protagonist is bit weak good development and still has to develop

Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw

I read this work on a Chinese site and I can say that it is very high quality. Of course, not without flaws. One commentator earlier mentioned the disproportionately unbalanced development of the family and literally feeding his sister with a golden spoon, although the main character gave a lot and gave up a lot for them. There are several poisonous moments that you can skip and read on. According to all the canons of Chinese authors, the plot is quite stretched out, although I must say that if San Gege or Yu xiao Pig are killed too early, the plot loses its meaning and such works are quickly abandoned. Therefore, sometimes for the plot of two bastards, an artificial "buff" is added. About the pros. The main character is smart and cautious. Not a typical main character with plot armor. The world is big and quite alive and not everything revolves around a few people. I recommend trying to read this fic.

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The story is good and not monotonous, the writing is also good, and this fanfic is really good[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

A good Soul Land fic. It's not exceptional but it's really good and the best part is that the fact that it's translated is only noticeable by some small errors that sometimes appear. The story itself lacks the problems that the vast majority of Chinese fics have, which makes this one of the rare ones that can be read without going through major rage attacks due to completely ooc characters or something like that. The only big problem with the fic is that the MC seems to be the only one with a brain and common sense, but on the other hand this is in line with what I remember of Soul Land so it's not the fic's fault... Other than that I love how the MC does a good job of reasonably pointing out the hypocrisy of Tang San and other characters without really seeming to become a bashing fic. Finally, it's worth mentioning that many people complained about MC not getting a better second soul ring to keep a low profile, as well as complaining when MC for very reasonable reasons decided not to risk a 10k+ fourth soul ring (although he ended up getting one due to a beast that was worth the risk). So if you're someone who really cares about Min Max even in the early stages that aren't very relevant in the long run, this might end up bothering you.

Hasta ahora son más de 120 capítulos y la historia sigue siendo buena, hay algunas cosas molestas con respecto al romance, pero es principalmente porque encuentro extraño el típico drama romántico característico en muchas historias Chinas, me refiero a pellizcar a su pareja, hacer pucheros y tener comportamientos infantiles e irracionales, principalmente en comunes en sus heroínas. Nunca me acostumbraré a ésto, llegue al punto en que me preguntó si todas las historias son iguales, pues los personajes femeninos terminan siendo copias prácticamente idénticas.

The story is actually good. Merry Christmas. 🎅🍻