Douluo Dalu:Breaking Clan

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MC is a COMPLETE pushover. Trust me, I am not talking about MC listening to or doing things for his family. That is normal imo. But this guys is getting pushed around by EVERYONE. From complete strangers to kids, anyone can come around and treat this MC like their dog.

Hi i am just translating this by correcting some mistakes, and it's actually a pretty good Douluo Dalu fanfic. If you want get access to advanced chapters you can join Patreon

Having a spear martial soul is very rare in soul land fics so I fully recommend this one which is like a breath of fresh air. But the problem is mc helps his family way too much which is very irritating. The mc's sister feels like a npc who only receives help from him without giving anything in return which makes the plot more unbearable. On the other hand, it has many many interesting developments which I won't spoil for you but it will makes it worth your time. By the way guys can you tell me your favourite martial soul in soul land? I like the Angel Martial Soul and Clear Sky Hammer martial soul what about you.

For around 180 chapters or so. It's a pretty good novel. The premise is great. Our mc has the foreknowledge about the world and seizes all opportunities. However, after reading past that point, it's getting more and more obvious that there are glaring holes in the plot. It's like the author wants the mc to be the underdog, but the mc's foreknowledge makes that impossible, so they need to actively sabotage him. He constantly goes from being "super smart" to making subzero IQ decisions when it matters. >!Absorbing whale glue -> intentionally absorbing weaker rings Getting ALL of the spirit herbs -> giving all of them away getting spirit bones -> giving them away getting divine inheritance items -> giving them away< It's getting tedious to read this. Especially, since his sister is getting everything he's discarding. It could be justified, if we got to know her as a person, but we're not. We know nothing about this character whatsoever. There is nothing to empathize about, I couldn't care less about her.

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can Anyone tell me its Raw(Chinese) name?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw Doulou dalu: shooting the sun is the name of this fic 斗罗之擎天射日 here's the raw

Yeah it is good but still he is too weak and novel update stability is not good and protagonist is bit weak good development and still has to develop

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10/10 read so far this is nice :P [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I read this work on a Chinese site and I can say that it is very high quality. Of course, not without flaws. One commentator earlier mentioned the disproportionately unbalanced development of the family and literally feeding his sister with a golden spoon, although the main character gave a lot and gave up a lot for them. There are several poisonous moments that you can skip and read on. According to all the canons of Chinese authors, the plot is quite stretched out, although I must say that if San Gege or Yu xiao Pig are killed too early, the plot loses its meaning and such works are quickly abandoned. Therefore, sometimes for the plot of two bastards, an artificial "buff" is added. About the pros. The main character is smart and cautious. Not a typical main character with plot armor. The world is big and quite alive and not everything revolves around a few people. I recommend trying to read this fic.

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