Marry Me, Miss Villainess

I have read up to 7 ch so far and im hoping the author can read this because I have some feedback about the book's grammar and whatnot Its so far pretty well (and I hope Arianna will end up with Yago cuz in my opinion he better than Jayden but anyways not the main point) but some things are that I can see sometimes the author mistaken "him" to "her" vice versa and "her" to "he" vice versa so I suggest having an editor to check on it (I would do it but I am tired rn lol cuz I usually give corrections myself to help authors tho I can help later if you need it) and I think there may be small grammar mistakes not sure I usually correct any small issues in my head anyways besides those errors I think this novel is really good so far! keep it up!

I stared reading this novel recently and I am already hooked up with its plot and all the twists in it and the best thing it's already completed 😆😆and I found your other novel interesting too ....I hope you will continue writing it ... ..

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Pretty good read so far. The storyline is pretty interesting with plot twists scattered throughout the chapters. You’ll either really love some of the characters or really hate them because of the intense situations. Can’t wait to read more 😍

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The story line is clear cut and concise. The backstory is good The flow length of the story is well written as well. sometimes, at first, it gets a bit tough to keep up with scene transitions but later on as you get the gasp of it, it becomes better.

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I like the story, simple but written nicely and all ends well. 😆😆 Want to read about the kids if possible. Will read your other story. Keep up the great work. 😆🙏🏻🙏🏻